Apoorva Patrikar Poet Concrete

Endless Love

   Endless love


                  I entered the		          world and I
               Instantly loved the	      person I could see
             It’s only because of	     her, that today I am
           Able to be the person	 I’ve always wanted to be
        She had to do it all alone:look after me, make a home
          When I was scared and looked back, she was there
              When I was ill and felt very sad, she was there
                When I broke down, I lost it, she was there
                   When I wanted the fun, she was there
                       In ups and downs, she was there 
                            Our love is certainly endless
                                I’m proud to say that
                                   I have the worlds
                                        Bestestest
                                           mother

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Vivek Malhotra May 22, 2016 at 1:09 AM Best way to format a poem for the best person in the world. Great execution.

Jack Horne October 21, 2012 at 6:57 AM love this, my friend - congrats on all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown September 30, 2012 at 2:32 PM Congratulations on your win in Gail Doyle's "My Endless Love" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 30, 2012 at 8:37 AM I thought this was so clever fisrt time I am happy it is worth a win and so it should xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 30, 2012 at 3:54 AM OH APOORVA A LOVELY WRITE AND SHAPELY WIN SO BEAUTIFUL AS THE HEART SYMBOLIZES LOVE .. BRAVO ..

Joyce Johnson September 29, 2012 at 4:28 PM Although I claim the best as mine, it is your right to claim the prize for yours but you say it so prettily. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Black Eyed Susan September 26, 2012 at 9:39 AM awe...heart-wearming as well as heart shaped! I bet she'll give you a big hug when you give her this :)

Poet Destroyer A September 23, 2012 at 10:34 PM Apoorva, love the heart shape.. and your words touched my heart, with your vision of what love really is.. you are a sweet person,, my mom was as wonderful tooo...love your concrete poem... xox~pd

S.Jagathsimhan Nair September 23, 2012 at 3:43 AM Bestest write! Thanx! Jag

September 23, 2012 at 3:29 AM Beautiful poem, love Elizabeth

Lucilla Carrillo September 22, 2012 at 10:04 PM What a way to write a poem. Your mother must be very proud. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Jack Horne September 18, 2012 at 9:17 AM awww, beautiful tribute to your mother, my friend

Harry Horsman September 18, 2012 at 6:59 AM you are truly a wonderful and sincere poet, this is awesome!!!!!!

Cynthia Alvez September 17, 2012 at 3:08 AM How absolutely beautiful! A lovely tribute to your mother and an outstanding entry. You touched my heart... Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich September 16, 2012 at 10:43 AM So sweet and I like how you made a long word: bestestest. I joke around with that word sometimes and say: Bestest! Great entry to the contest. and great visual way to format it.

Doris Culverhouse September 16, 2012 at 9:49 AM great thoughts! I love the shape too!!

Jon A Cavanaugh September 16, 2012 at 7:24 AM Very clever poem with the heart shaped format And what beautiful sentiment. Very well done