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Endless Love

   Endless love


                  I entered the		          world and I
               Instantly loved the	      person I could see
             It’s only because of	     her, that today I am
           Able to be the person	 I’ve always wanted to be
        She had to do it all alone:look after me, make a home
          When I was scared and looked back, she was there
              When I was ill and felt very sad, she was there
                When I broke down, I lost it, she was there
                   When I wanted the fun, she was there
                       In ups and downs, she was there 
                            Our love is certainly endless
                                I’m proud to say that
                                   I have the worlds
                                        Bestestest
                                           mother

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Vivek Malhotra

Date: 5/22/2016 1:09:00 AM

Best way to format a poem for the best person in the world. Great execution.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/21/2012 6:57:00 AM

love this, my friend - congrats on all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2012 2:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Gail Doyle's "My Endless Love" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/30/2012 8:37:00 AM

I thought this was so clever fisrt time I am happy it is worth a win and so it should xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/30/2012 3:54:00 AM

OH APOORVA A LOVELY WRITE AND SHAPELY WIN SO BEAUTIFUL AS THE HEART SYMBOLIZES LOVE .. BRAVO ..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/29/2012 4:28:00 PM

Although I claim the best as mine, it is your right to claim the prize for yours but you say it so prettily. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/26/2012 9:39:00 AM

awe...heart-wearming as well as heart shaped! I bet she'll give you a big hug when you give her this :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2012 10:34:00 PM

Apoorva, love the heart shape.. and your words touched my heart, with your vision of what love really is.. you are a sweet person,, my mom was as wonderful tooo...love your concrete poem... xox~pd

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 9/23/2012 3:43:00 AM

Bestest write! Thanx! Jag

Date: 9/23/2012 3:29:00 AM

Beautiful poem, love Elizabeth

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/22/2012 10:04:00 PM

What a way to write a poem. Your mother must be very proud. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Jack Horne

Date: 9/18/2012 9:17:00 AM

awww, beautiful tribute to your mother, my friend

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/18/2012 6:59:00 AM

you are truly a wonderful and sincere poet, this is awesome!!!!!!

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/17/2012 3:08:00 AM

How absolutely beautiful! A lovely tribute to your mother and an outstanding entry. You touched my heart... Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2012 10:43:00 AM

So sweet and I like how you made a long word: bestestest. I joke around with that word sometimes and say: Bestest! Great entry to the contest. and great visual way to format it.