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Endless Love

I thought I saw you yesterday. My heart assumed an unfamiliar arrhythmia mode. True it was a humid and hectic day and I was wearied out. So as I sauntered down the busy main street, when everyone and his friend had just finished work. I though I saw you on the opposite side, strolling towards our favourite snack bar down by the riverside. Alas I could not cross immediately for traffic was as usual heavy, and the ill-fated traffic lights took such a long time to change. Finally I hurried to the snack bar. My heart beat faster. A woman sat at a table, our favourite table, right by the window side. Her hair was auburn, curly hair just like yours, her dress a haunting memory of you. But I knew it could not be. She turned her head as if she was waiting for someone. Then I was certain it was not you. So I felt ashamed, truly ashamed. My eyes brimmed with tears. I hurried out and took a bus, arrived just before closing time. I just had time to stand before the stone that spelled your name so fine. Rest in peace my love and remember I'll love you till the end of time. 27 October 2020 Silent One Contest Placed 2

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Date: 11/5/2020 12:25:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 9:31:00 AM
A forever love, gone but never forgotten A poignant ending Victor, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/5/2020 5:57:00 AM
A sad poem and I think something many will go through who have lost a loved one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 11/1/2020 4:20:00 PM
Beautifully written, Victor. I love the words "I'll love you till the end of time". Have a great night :)
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Date: 10/30/2020 8:34:00 AM
A sensitive, sad, touching yet beautiful poem. I have seen my dad in other people often, so I know the feeling. God bless you Victor, one day far in the future (for we said you have many more poems to write), you will be re-united and be together till the end of time. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/29/2020 6:26:00 AM
Hi Victor, What a touching and poignant write you have penned. Scenarios such as these happen my friend. The love you two shared was special and it goes on, it’s endless. You expressed that fact very well in this well written and heartfelt write. Have a wonderful day- Alexis
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Date: 10/29/2020 7:17:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/28/2020 8:23:00 AM
Beautiful Victor ~ I understand these feelings my friend and for one moment they seem so real. My tears flow too as my heart reaches out to you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 10/28/2020 8:02:00 AM
I know these things happen, and so more tragic when it is your longtime love. My heart goes out to you.
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Date: 10/28/2020 7:21:00 AM
WOW!!! This is beautiful and such a eternal expression of your love. God bless you dear friend
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Date: 10/28/2020 3:31:00 AM
Those memories you have will stay with you forever and although you may be apart your love for each other will never die. Tom
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Date: 10/27/2020 10:27:00 PM
Oh so many times, this happens, Victor, yet your poetry makes it so special.
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Date: 10/27/2020 9:48:00 PM
Sometimes someone has a certain look or smile that reminds you of someone very dear. They live on in our hearts and our memories. Beautiful poem, Victor.
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Date: 10/27/2020 4:47:00 PM
So many times I've seen someone that I thought I knew and it wasn't them; heartbroken afterwards. Enjoyed reading my friend.
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Date: 10/27/2020 4:32:00 PM
A very beautiful poem, Victor. I can't even imagine how you felt at that moment. A haunting memory for sure. Have a great night. :)
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Date: 10/27/2020 2:29:00 PM
Heartfelt and beautiful Victor. She was a special woman...
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Date: 10/27/2020 6:35:00 AM
Your write tugs the heart, Victor--a powerful, emotive poem--skillfully delivered, as always.
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Date: 10/27/2020 6:13:00 AM
She will always remain alive in your heart, Victor, lovely poem:)
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Date: 10/27/2020 2:40:00 AM
Victor! What a moving poem and well done, my friend. I was following you as you followed your lost one. I do know that feeling. It all seems real but we know they are not here. You will be together again one day in more glorious circumstances! ~Panagiota~
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Date: 10/27/2020 2:38:00 AM
- Her soul is with you, Victor - I think you can feel her ... a lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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