Endless Love

my Valentine's rose is made from red crepe paper true love forever Haiku I love U 2 Contest Sponsored by James Edward Lee Snr 2/26/19
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Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 10:21 PM
Back with congrats, Jan.
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:15 PM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 5:48 PM
this was one of my favorites. Congrats, Jan
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:14 PM
was nice to be on the podium this time!:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 10:37 AM
a winsome hit, jan...congrats on your fine placement!...huggs
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:46 AM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Thanks sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 6:48 AM
Such a sweet poem, Jan. Congratulations on your win. Hugs // Charlie xx
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 4:25 AM
- Congratulations Jan, on your 1st place in this sweet contest: I Love U 2 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:13 PM
thanks so much Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:18 AM
Many congrats on your top win Jan, lovely Haiku, kindest thoughts Ann xx
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:24 AM
Thanks Ann, hope you came out unscathed from last nights storm, i know there were blocked and closed roads on the Island with trees down, we are all ok xx-) hugs Jan xx
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February 28, 2019 at 8:38 PM
I think it shows how much we care if we make our own Valentine's. Nicely done haiku.
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 3:53 AM
I've never made one and hubby and I don't 'do' Valentines with flowers or gifts I just cook a nice steak meal:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 7:11 PM
that is SO COOL . One of my favorites I have seen so far in this contest.
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 7:16 PM
thanks Andrea and its ironic as I don't even celebrate the day:-) sent you a mail xx:-) hugs Jan xx
Williams Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 5:51 PM
A very lovely and figurative Haiku. Amen, Blessings.
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 5:59 PM
thanks Ronald:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 2:18 PM
A wise choice, Jan :) It will last like everlasting love! All it needs is going over it with a brush every now and again :) Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 11:22 AM
pure fiction Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 12:12 PM
- I've made tulips of crepe paper, many years ago ... they didn't last forever :) - Beautifully written, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 11:21 AM
oh how beautiful Anne-Lise I know how creative you are:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 10:43 AM
I don't know if you intended the haiku this way, but the 'red crepe paper' brought a big smile to my face. And smiles make the world go round! :) :) gw
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 11:21 AM
Thanks GW I am glad my poem made you smile:-) hugs jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Beautifully done, Jan. Wonderful.
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 11:20 AM
thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 7:40 PM
How did you get crepe past spellcheck? Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 11:19 AM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Now that's true love, Jan. It's all about how it's given.
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 11:19 AM
thanks Line and the poem is total fiction and even though I proposed to hubby on a non leap year we never celebrate Valentine's day :-) hugs jan xx
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