"endless Concepts"

WISE WORDS WAIT, while foolish intellect speaks, 

conceits of mind, holier than thou, to no avail. 

Separates poor minority from select's special conceit elite!
 
Thus FED DARK DREAD, causes divisions of unrest,
 
by the dog eat DOG FOG, SPED DREAD.
 
Into our government,  into our churches, into our public schools,
 
into our civil organizations. Complexities of our times,
 
the same o, same o's, SIMPLE___ COMPLEX problem.
 
The SAME SYNDROME SADDUCEE or pharisee of Christ’s day.
 
The WHITE__ BLACK hat syndrome, the democrat, the republican,
 
GOOD! VILLAIN! The male, the female! The man ,
 
the woman! The black man, the white man! The list goes on!
 
As precept morality(Love) versus double minded,
 
double standard, wickedness of mind level concepts,
 
at best, delusions of grandeur. More laws made to govern 

laws. Conceited intellects of love, oblivious to their own true fact, 

within their own Love is the law in and of itself! 

By John Mose Freeman

 For contest: Free for all, do as you please
In Honor of Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Well done Preacher! we all need agood tongue lashing once and a while congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:02 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "Free For All Do As You Please". Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 10:49 PM
Many many Congratulations on your win in this contest.
Richards Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 5:26 PM
Such wisdom and power in this poem! Speaks loudly, John...great job!! ps...thanks so much for your constant support, and kind comments! :) Love, Carrie
Devonshire Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 2:22 PM
See, John, some people DO appreciate your wisdom! Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Love, Carolyn PS - got your soup mail, looked at the comments you left and had a great laugh. She's already been reported to Soup Admin. Thanks for lifting my spirits. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM
A big congratulations to you for your win, john. I told you it would do well. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Congrats Moses on your super win in Charles's contest with this tremendous write my friend.. enjoy a happy weekend.. with luv..
Gorelick Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Congrats John, some nice phrasing here. BG
Guzzi Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:00 AM
I see the oxymorons John..double check you have 3 alliterations, DEEP DARK DREAD is 1 same syndrome sadducee/ is 2 you need to capitalize it... maybe same o, same o? is 3..MY blog was just a discussion not a contest John..the contest is for "Old fashion Cures..like what Gram did to heal you!" Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 3:29 PM
Good luck in the contest with this excellent political write..Reads like a winners' circle to me..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:46 AM
John, "Breaking" was written when I was 24 and my husband had just died. It was simply an outpouring of overwhelming emotion. I don't write much free verse anymore; that's why I posted and entered that one. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 8:50 PM
HI, there, John and thanks for your comments to my poems. I think you will do well with this one. YOu gave a great title for these concepts that never seem to end in our world as we know it! Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 6:25 PM
A very inspirational and wisdom-packed free verse, John. Lots of great lines! Really like the White/Black hat syndrome. It's hard to tell what color hats people are wearing these days. Too many disguises, falsehoods. Best wishes for success in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Chachere Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 4:54 PM
love is the law sums it all up. its amazing how it just completed your purpose of this write perfectly.. sleeping geeks, reminds me of dreams. no matter what the law, love will always become the core of it.. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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August 20, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Wow what words woven where wit was working!!
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