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End Of The Road

All smile is wrecked As he stood cold-dead like a stone All smile is wrecked As he slumped like a thrown object Solemn regrets turn heart's ring tone Bitter tomorrow chokes thought's zone All smile is wrecked By: Joseph Osita For Dr Ram's contest:'RONDELET'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 8/13/2011 3:13:00 PM
Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest or has it already been...I need to look at the Rondeau form and see what it is about..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2011 5:49:00 PM
Yowza! Intense and interesting use of a difficult form... I like it!
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:16:00 AM
such a grating yet beautiful song that is glazed with imagery, joseph! winning wishes to you... come visit! :)huggs, nette
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