End of the Road

All smile is wrecked
As he stood cold-dead like a stone
All smile is wrecked
As he slumped like a thrown object
Solemn regrets turn heart's ring tone
Bitter tomorrow chokes thought's zone 
All smile is wrecked


 By: Joseph Osita
For Dr Ram's contest:'RONDELET'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 3:13 PM
Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest or has it already been...I need to look at the Rondeau form and see what it is about..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Jones Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 5:49 PM
Yowza! Intense and interesting use of a difficult form... I like it!
Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 9:16 AM
such a grating yet beautiful song that is glazed with imagery, joseph! winning wishes to you... come visit! :)huggs, nette
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