End of Haviland

end of Haviland stilled kickstands & spokes of Schwinn our teen shapely thighs after school books are returned and mind wanders down the road chill in Summer heat orange & vanilla twist creamsicle in cone the yield of sweet and tincture melting on curbside tongues

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Date: 5/21/2024 9:43:00 PM
Loved it, really- I could feel Summer through your work
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2024 6:20:00 AM
Awesome! So glad, Paige! It will be here soon and the school kids are looking forward to it.
Date: 5/21/2024 4:05:00 PM
Never heard of Haviland but the poem conveys a good idea of what it is. I sure miss my school days and looking forward to summer play. It always went so dang fast!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2024 7:23:00 PM
It’s the name of a road. Boy did we look forward to the Summer. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/21/2024 1:58:00 PM
It takes me back to read this poem. The joy of being a child outdoors at play is a lifestyle that is becoming lost. Too bad we can't live it over again.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2024 2:10:00 PM
So true! Think I’ll put my feet on the handlebars ;) Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 5/21/2024 1:37:00 PM
Creative one. Must be a contest going on, I think I have seen a couple of tankas recently. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2024 2:12:00 PM
Not for a contest. Thank you, dear Sara! :)
Date: 5/21/2024 7:19:00 AM
Superb write! You get a FAV!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2024 8:15:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 5/20/2024 5:38:00 PM
Ooh I used to love orange creamsicles from the ice cream truck as a kid
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2024 5:53:00 PM
I rarely have them now, but they were so good!
Date: 5/20/2024 3:12:00 PM
Very nice!! Pangie Romios
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2024 3:31:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie!
Date: 5/20/2024 2:09:00 PM
Oh for the taste of some vanilla and peppermint ice cream. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2024 3:31:00 PM
Sounds good :) Hugs
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