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End of Day

a blaze of orange
beckons you to the day's end
sighs and silhouettes


7-15-2020
1st place

sunsethaiku

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Edward Ibeh

July 29, 2020 at 12:05 PM

Back with congrats on a wonderful win, Jeanne!:-)

Aditi Mishra

July 29, 2020 at 12:48 AM

I love how magically you've painted those silhouettes Jeanne. Congratulations on your win :)

William Kelii Kekaula

July 28, 2020 at 11:19 PM

Beyond touched, Jeanne, my compliments on your well deserved 1st Place win, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Jeanne Mcgee

July 28, 2020 at 11:39 PM

thank you William...I always feel blessed when I have the time to sit by the sea to watch the sun depart...an amazing part of the day. :]

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2020 at 8:27 PM

beautiful!

Michelle Faulkner

July 23, 2020 at 8:21 PM

This captures that peaceful feeling of day's end so eloquently, such a tender write...

Jeanne Mcgee

July 24, 2020 at 8:47 AM

Thanks Michelle.

Caren Krutsinger

July 17, 2020 at 2:44 AM

Ah, this one made me sigh Jeanne. So delicate!

Edward Ibeh

July 16, 2020 at 6:49 PM

Lovely, Jeanne!:-) Thoroughly enjoyed. I also have an end-of-day poem in kimo form

Jeanne Mcgee

July 16, 2020 at 10:33 PM

I'll have go have a read...I haven't done a kimo. Thanks for letting me know! :D

John Gondolf

July 16, 2020 at 12:02 PM

Silhouettes in the sunset, a beautiful romantic haiku, Jeanne, nicely penned. Hugs, John

Jeanne Mcgee

July 16, 2020 at 10:34 PM

Thank you John...it was a lovely evening!

End of Day

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