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Premiere Contest WinnerEnd of Age

At the edge of town stood, a government research centre 
It was heavily guarded, no unauthorised persons could enter
The authorities put down rumours, saying its just a research station 
But word got out they were trying, to open an other dimension. 

One night a massive blast took off the research station roof
If anyone doubted the rumours, here now was the proof 
The gates of hell opened, with the sound of blood curdling screams 
And out poured tall green creatures, only found in hellish dreams. 

They were humanoid winged reptilians with eyes a blood red
The townspeople heard the blast, many of them were in bed 
All the streetlights went out and the sky turned pitch black 
Under the cover of darkness the creatures launched an attack. 

They entered every house and mutilated everyone inside
There was pools of blood everywhere; hundreds had died
The police and army arrived and fired shell after shell
But they too were slaughtered by these demons from hell. 

They kept coming out of the portal and went from town to town 
They were annihilating mankind and they weren't slowing down 
By the next day they'd invaded, across the world every land
No weapons could stop them, they had the upper hand 

World leaders held an urgent meeting and agreed a strategy 
But that strategy would mean, the end of humanity 
The plan was to launch nuclear missiles, it was the only way
If mankind couldn't rule the earth then neither would they. 

The countdown time was agreed and it was announced worldwide
Everyone told to stay at home, with your loved ones by your side
People were crying, religious leaders urged people to pray
Ten minutes later earth was vaporised on mankind's darkest day.



Written on 30th April 2021 

A Poem of Horror Poetry Contest

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George Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 3:52 AM
Wow.... the demons from hell... ! Will I see them again in the dark with glowing blood red eyes... I am afraid ! You the master story teller has created such a scene of horror, so terrifying ! Great win .
Cunningham Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 4:28 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, there was a film by Stephen King called the Mist that inspired it. Sleep with the light on lol. Tom
Boreham Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 8:04 AM
WOW Congratulations on your well deserved win Tom, I don't often read horror though glad i read this one, even Fav'd it ! Brilliant horror story with great rhythm and rhyme. Well Done !!
Cunningham Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 8:35 AM
Thank you very much Paris for your congrats, im happy you enjoyed it. Thanks too for the fave. Tom
Lamoureux Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:38 AM
Made me think of “War of The World” this is so well done Tom. Bravo and congrats on your Trophy. ;0)
Cunningham Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Richard, im happy you enjoyed it, I love twilight zone type stories, Stephen Kings the mist inspired this one. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Very well written poem about a very fictitious imaginings. I would say you do have an imagination gone wild. LOL. We know that it is not going to happen. Thanks for dropping by my page. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:47 AM
Thank you Sara, i wouldn't argue with that, I often wonder where those ideas come from. I do wonder what goes on in these secret places like Area 51. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!! What a story/write. You are a wonderful story teller even on the dark side. Have a blessed day............
Cunningham Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thank you very much Paula, im happy that you enjoyed it. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
Daniel Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 3:28 AM
Wow! I knew this would win, Congratulations on trophy win, Tom:)
Cunningham Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 4:53 AM
Thank you very much for your return visit and congrats Jo. Much appreciated. Tom
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 10:47 AM
Wow! A really Horror Poem, Tom! Congratulations on your trophy, it’s so well-deserved! BW ~ Mala
Cunningham Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 10:53 AM
Thank you very much Malabika, im happy that you enjoyed it, It was inspired by a Stephen King story called The Mist. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 12:11 PM
- I just want to mention ... I'm scared of the dark, Tom - An awesome poem - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Thank you very much Anne, hope you are well on the way to recovery. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 12:13 AM
Tom, this is certainly a poem of true horror - what an amazing write so well penned and loads of congratulations on your deserved win. Hope you and the family all well, we are going through our third wave of Covid. Our boys very strict with our going out at all. Blessings, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Jennifer, im pleased that you enjoyed it. I'm well, just been away with family for a week, hope you and yours are OK, Tom
Agustin Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your poetic talent... God bless you.
Cunningham Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 1:07 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Beata, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Mitra Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:13 AM
An extremely powerful write Tom....Congrats on your win :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Carol, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Congrats on your top win with this fabulous write!! You love space from star trek to space invaders !!:)
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:15 AM
Thank you very much Krish, im glad you enjoyed it. Anything outside of normal catches my attention. Greetings from the New Forest. Tom
Makama Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 7:26 AM
Thank you very much for this wonderful entry. I truly enjoyed your work. A big big congratulations to you.
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Thank you very much for my placement Funom, im happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks also for hosting the contest. Tom
Laurie Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 11:45 PM
Hello Tom ... a horror movie in the making and it's enough to scare the pants of the bravest - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Thank you Lindsay, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 2:27 AM
Hi Tom, I enjoyed reading your story very much and was thinking along the same lines as Victor, the dreaded virus bugs came to mind. Great imagining and story telling. Just know you’ll do well in the contest… Belle
Cunningham Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 4:11 AM
Thank you very much Belle, Its been the unseen enemy of mankind and just when you think it's going away more deadly variants appear, we're not planning on flying anytime soon. Tom
Faulkner Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 10:42 AM
I can't imagine anything more horrifying than this scenario, having to destroy the entire planet to stop the invaders, this is creepily captivating! Should be a top winner :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Thank you very much Michelle, a terrifying thought indeed. Hope you're keeping well and I hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Brown  Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 5:17 PM
Really enjoyed reading this! I was gripped! Beware of the mist! You should start writing film scripts! :-)
Cunningham Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 3:11 AM
Thank you very much Lisa, im pleased that you enjoyed it. It was that movie the mist that inspired me. Tom
Sands Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Wow Tom. This is great story telling! Perfect horror write you did with this! Keep on writing my friend. This one really pulled me in and seems so real too :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 12:27 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, im happy that you enjoyed it. It was the master of horror who inspired me, Stephen King. Tom
Horsman Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:45 AM
Move over Stephen King, Wow, talk about the pen is mightier than the alien. I'm speechless, Tom. The imagery is superb, I do believe the creatures are amongst us now, wait till they read this gem, then they'll know their covers has been blown wide open.
Cunningham Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Thank you very much Harry, who knows what goes on in places like Area 51, there's been rumours about trying to open other dimensions, God help us if they ever succeed. Hope you're well. Tom
Poet Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 2:40 AM
Hi Tom, A fantastic poem, on the other hand, is frightening in its nature when it paints a detailed image of what humans are capable of. Nothing is shocking any longer: everybody wants to lead the world. Very best regards // Lasaad
Cunningham Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 2:55 AM
Thank you very much Lasaad, you're right, mankind is on a very dangerous path going to places he knows nothing about. Mankind will cause his own destruction in the end. Hope you have a great week. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:11 PM
wow you went all out on the Apocalypse theme!! Utter destruction. WELL DONE for horror theme!
Cunningham Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, im happy that you liked it. It does make you wonder what goes on in these secret places. Tom
Flood Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:08 PM
I'm glad you survived to tell this chilling tale, Tom, as otherwise I wouldn't have known I'm a ghost. I suppose you did check that all those demons weren't just teenagers?... only asking. Good write and good luck in the contest. Terry
Cunningham Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Lol, well funny enough it was Halloween and it was no treat. Thanks Terry. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 4:35 AM
So well written! The first part reminded me of the series “Strange Things”
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 5:57 AM
My daughter told us about it too! :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 4:45 AM
Thank you very much Kim, My daughter told me about that series, I was hooked. Hope you're well. Tom
Wolf Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 5:56 PM
I wonder if the wokesters would censor this one for children along with Dr. Seuss. Probably not, eh?! lol. My blood's curdling, Tom. :) gw
Cunningham Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 1:03 AM
Lol, thank you Gershon, bit by bit our freedom is being eroded, where will it end. Tom
Mcconnell Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 1:36 PM
An amazing piece Tom, with great imagery and insightful expression as well. Hope you've had a great weekend, Blessings always, Gordon
Leffanta Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 11:38 AM
I think you have forecast, "The End", Tom! Aloha! Rico
Cunningham Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Thank you very much Gordon, im happy that you liked it. Been doing some diy, thankfully im near the end of it now. Hope you too have enjoyed your weekend. Tom
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