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End of a Flame

the yellow slant of the squinting sun silently swallowed the black of green red roads ascended to the pretty sky n sorrow spilled down the stream quietly streames giggled bangles clinked my soul rocketed to the realms unknown haunting the conscience,deep within hymning angels caressing the heart n deep abyss gladly in emptiness stares darkness surrounds depth of darkness, intoxicates musk of silence lingers dearth of thoughts eyes stared into the brain no ripples end of the flame blowing wind stopped to a halt blood froze in its track the track of birth and life and love for a new existence {from

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Date: 12/6/2015 6:50:00 AM
few poems in hindi and spanish.could write if i try but natural flow wont be there. that will have its own beauty.i am a freaking physician also with five kids and one wife.happiest man on earth.
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Date: 12/6/2015 6:47:00 AM
keith.my first language is malayalam ,from kerala southern tip of india called " gods own country"i have written books of poetry. second language english. you know the colonial hang over.written couple of books.never tried to publish."structure of virtues for advanced souls"it is kind of an epic about life in poem.then "present testament for focused golfers" same gen
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Date: 12/6/2015 1:47:00 AM
Cool language my friend! '...streams giggled, bangles clinked,' '...musk of silence lingers,' '...blood froze in its track.' You have your own way of expressing... it's unique! Well done!! Best wishes, Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/6/2015 1:56:00 AM
Your English is exceptional... how many languages?
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/6/2015 1:49:00 AM
thanks keith. i havent read much poetry or know about the rules. may be a blessing.besides i write in other languages who has diff expression anyway life is beautiful

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