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Encrusted

Old Eddie was a “has been” pizza maker With a recipe rejected by even a faker. He tried a new blend However in the end It was as passe as his ’65 Studebaker.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2015 10:44:00 PM

cute title for a cute limerick. Let me see a few more!

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/29/2015 10:55:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Are you sure you want to see more? You are a brave woman (and an awesome poet). Hugs.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/25/2015 7:35:00 PM

G'day Paul... we only eat home made pizzas so I probably don't know what a good pizza is. However, I think I'll avoid any requests from Old Eddie - catch you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/26/2015 8:31:00 AM

I love to hear from my ever-faithful "down under" correspondent. Thank you, Lindsay, for your perceptive comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2015 7:22:00 PM

great humour as ever Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/25/2015 7:27:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Your comments always give me cause to rejoice.