Encrusted

Old Eddie was a “has been” pizza maker
With a recipe rejected by even a faker.
He tried a new blend
However in the end
It was as passe as his ’65 Studebaker.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 10:44 PM
cute title for a cute limerick. Let me see a few more!
Schneiter Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Are you sure you want to see more? You are a brave woman (and an awesome poet). Hugs.
Laurie Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:35 PM
G'day Paul... we only eat home made pizzas so I probably don't know what a good pizza is. However, I think I'll avoid any requests from Old Eddie - catch you Paul - Lindsay
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August 26, 2015 at 8:31 AM
I love to hear from my ever-faithful "down under" correspondent. Thank you, Lindsay, for your perceptive comment.
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:22 PM
great humour as ever Paul:-) hugs jan xx
Schneiter Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:27 PM
Thank you, Jan. Your comments always give me cause to rejoice.
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