Ana Espinola Collins Poet Free verse

Enchantress Commander

The creature of beauty;
a curvature silhouette
with a sweet scent and tenderness
that can wittingly
or
unknowingly
lure and sedate the beast.
This Enchantress,
once sanctioned as weaker,
merely the bearer of offspring
has evolved
from a sex goddess 
into a commander,
able to rule
an army of warriors
by way of power,
yet 
remain true 
to her instinctive nature
as sensual,
the nurturer
a creature of beauty;
the woman.


by Ana Espinola Collins

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Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2014 at 6:39 AM outstanding piece of writing

Arthur Vaso August 22, 2014 at 11:01 PM I couldn't agree more, what a beautiful poem! Ana Espinola Collins August 23, 2014 at 4:55 PM Hi Arthur....thanks for visiting.... Your comments are always appreciated :)Ana

Paul Callus August 21, 2014 at 2:57 PM You are right in what you write, Ana; but unfortunately there are quite a few countries where women are still treated very badly and they have little or no say. Having said that, may I say well done for a lovely and expressive poem. :) // paul Ana Espinola Collins August 21, 2014 at 6:59 PM Yes there are...so very sad that in this day and age it's still happening. I hope that one day all women from around the world will treated equally...peace :) Ana

Tim Smith August 20, 2014 at 9:07 PM How beautiful Ana....love the metaphor...a woman can do anything.....hugs Tim Ana Espinola Collins August 21, 2014 at 8:33 AM Yes...women are great multi-taskers! Glad you liked it...thanks for visiting :) Ana