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Enchantress Commander

The creature of beauty; a curvature silhouette with a sweet scent and tenderness that can wittingly or unknowingly lure and sedate the beast. This Enchantress, once sanctioned as weaker, merely the bearer of offspring has evolved from a sex goddess into a commander, able to rule an army of warriors by way of power, yet remain true to her instinctive nature as sensual, the nurturer a creature of beauty; the woman. by Ana Espinola Collins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/14/2014 6:39:00 AM
outstanding piece of writing
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Date: 8/22/2014 11:01:00 PM
I couldn't agree more, what a beautiful poem!
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Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 8/23/2014 4:55:00 PM
Hi Arthur....thanks for visiting.... Your comments are always appreciated :)Ana
Date: 8/21/2014 2:57:00 PM
You are right in what you write, Ana; but unfortunately there are quite a few countries where women are still treated very badly and they have little or no say. Having said that, may I say well done for a lovely and expressive poem. :) // paul
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Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 8/21/2014 6:59:00 PM
Yes there are...so very sad that in this day and age it's still happening. I hope that one day all women from around the world will treated equally...peace :) Ana
Date: 8/20/2014 9:07:00 PM
How beautiful Ana....love the metaphor...a woman can do anything.....hugs Tim
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Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 8/21/2014 8:33:00 AM
Yes...women are great multi-taskers! Glad you liked it...thanks for visiting :) Ana