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Poem written - 15th June 2023

 

 

Enchantment
Enchantment is earth’s garden golden crowned Where a sanctuary of calm is found A place where doleful hearts are freed from pain And sadness turns to happiness again. Hope, faith and peacefulness gently restored In a haven that's much loved and adored A paradise filled with lavish stardom Perceived in splendour of a lush garden. Expose your heart to the musical strains Of pitter pattering droplets of rain Trilling birdsong and the buzzing of bees Sweet melodies heard o’er whispering breeze. Magnificent flowers and stately trees Fluttering butterflies adorn the frieze Feathery white clouds that are drifting by Sunshine embracing exquisite blue sky. Oh for the joyfulness and enchantment In the grandeur of God’s worldwide garden Grant thanks and praise to our heavenly Lord There’s so many reasons for our accord.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/29/2023 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem!
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Date: 6/22/2023 6:03:00 AM
Belle dear friend congratulations on your win, and so it should be .Such a pretty poem and absolutely picture perfect. Each of your stanzas is like a bouquet of flowers. Be well, hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 6/22/2023 5:22:00 AM
Belle, thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations, and what a delightful image !
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/22/2023 6:01:00 AM
Thank you Constance, it was a delight to write for your contest… Belle
Date: 6/21/2023 11:51:00 AM
Enjoyed very much.Thanks for sharing
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/22/2023 6:00:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commentating Joyce, it’s much appreciated… Belle
Date: 6/21/2023 2:24:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this.... delighting and delightful from the start 'til the end. God bless you.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/21/2023 2:35:00 AM
Thank you Beata and God bless you too… Belle
Date: 6/20/2023 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Have a great day.............
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Date: 6/20/2023 7:17:00 AM
Back with huge congrats Belle! :)
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Date: 6/19/2023 3:07:00 PM
Belle, Back with congratulations on your contest win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 6/19/2023 9:00:00 AM
Amen Belle. A lovely nature write with great imagery and beauty painted in each stanza. :)
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Date: 6/16/2023 5:22:00 AM
Belle, Your poem exudes a profound beauty, adorned with mesmerizing imagery. I deeply appreciate the meticulous craftsmanship with which you have composed it. It flawlessly encapsulates the essence of the inexorable march of time, as each individual inevitably experiences their own designated moment, leaving no one unscathed.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/16/2023 10:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Sotto for your wonderful review, I really appreciate, it I truly do… Belle
Date: 6/16/2023 2:17:00 AM
Brilliant and elegant poem. How I wish I were in God's garden.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/16/2023 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Victor, keep it in heart and mind your day will come for no one gets left behind, no way… Belle

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