Enchantment

The enchantment of our magical moment
Epitomized an intoxicating aura
The dancing of our minds and bodies
Through sprinkles of angel dust in the air

The enchantment of our magical moment
When true love ignited deep in our hearts
Only ours to share

June 22, 2018


Seven Lines Of Romantic Heaven Contest by Silent One
Second Place
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Flaherty Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 6:25 PM
Only ours to share. The very point of love Nice Susan Well written
Gentry Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Thanks.
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Susan, congratulations on your win. Nicely done and very beautiful . Hugs Eve ~`*
Gentry Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 10:47 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Pandit Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win Susan. A lovely romantic poem.
Gentry Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Thank you so much!
Sharma Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Ohh the magical Sparks! Congratulations! :)
Gentry Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Why, thank you! :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Big congrats, Susan, on your win! What a lovely romantic piece! Hugs. Pandita
Pett Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan, beautifully written and certainly enchanting. :))
Sands Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations for your win Susan :)
One Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:38 AM
Sounds magical.. Nothing like true love.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ajmal Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Ahh, you have written a really lovely poem, I am sure that will do good in the contest, good luck
Gentry Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Heavenly indeed, Susan.
Gentry Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 1:22 AM
Thanks, Andrea :)
Wolf Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Heaven is now populated by your fine poem. I especially like the last line. The implications are so profound, methinks: 'Selfishness' is so often thought to be 100% bad or even evil. Yet in this case, it's 100% good, isn't it?! ...As the Sage wrote: '...Do not mock any thing,...for every thing has its place.' (In the original Hebrew, 'place' also indicates the location of Heaven!) :) gw
Gentry Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 1:21 AM
Thank you! :)
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