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Enchantment

The enchantment of our magical moment
Epitomized an intoxicating aura
The dancing of our minds and bodies
Through sprinkles of angel dust in the air

The enchantment of our magical moment
When true love ignited deep in our hearts
Only ours to share

June 22, 2018


Seven Lines Of Romantic Heaven Contest by Silent One
Second Place

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Date: 6/30/2018 6:25:00 PM
Only ours to share. The very point of love Nice Susan Well written
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/7/2018 2:45:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 6/27/2018 8:09:00 PM
Susan, congratulations on your win. Nicely done and very beautiful . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/27/2018 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 6/26/2018 7:13:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win Susan. A lovely romantic poem.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/26/2018 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/25/2018 2:56:00 PM
Ohh the magical Sparks! Congratulations! :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/25/2018 3:14:00 PM
Why, thank you! :)
Date: 6/25/2018 11:38:00 AM
Big congrats, Susan, on your win! What a lovely romantic piece! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/25/2018 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan, beautifully written and certainly enchanting. :))
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations Susan in this magical write - the simple repitition is very effective and adds to the sweetness!
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:22:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations for your win Susan :)
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Date: 6/25/2018 6:38:00 AM
Sounds magical.. Nothing like true love.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/25/2018 4:23:00 AM
An enchanting, romantic verse, Susan. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 6/23/2018 11:18:00 AM
Ahh, you have written a really lovely poem, I am sure that will do good in the contest, good luck
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 7:57:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/22/2018 6:00:00 PM
Heavenly indeed, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 1:22:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea :)
Date: 6/22/2018 3:19:00 PM
Heaven is now populated by your fine poem. I especially like the last line. The implications are so profound, methinks: 'Selfishness' is so often thought to be 100% bad or even evil. Yet in this case, it's 100% good, isn't it?! ...As the Sage wrote: '...Do not mock any thing,...for every thing has its place.' (In the original Hebrew, 'place' also indicates the location of Heaven!) :) gw
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 1:21:00 AM
Thank you! :)