Enchantment

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Every year, the first time I trot the trusty yellow sprinkler out to revitalize my winter-scarred lawn, it's a bit magical for me. Kind of mesmerizing to watch the water rise and fall. At least for me it is...

Spring Lawn's Brown Sprinkler Time Enchantment's Climb Up Shoots Clear Magic Dancing Prisms Water Pools Birds Bathe Spring

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2018 12:34:00 PM

It does sound a bir magical! Love the images!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/29/2018 1:33:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words,...and may I be so bold as to suggest investing $5 or so in a plastic sprinkler, attaching it to a garden hose, and then partaking of that magic! :) gw

Eve Roper

Date: 4/27/2018 3:37:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Gershon <3

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/28/2018 10:04:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. May Spring prism rainbows be headed your way! :) Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/27/2018 11:02:00 AM

Clear magic dancing prisms. EXACTLY! Wow! I love this! Thank you for writing it, Mr. I.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2018 11:37:00 AM

And thank you for reading it and writing such a super-charged comment. It fuels me for the next one. Appreciated! :) Mr. Eye

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/27/2018 9:12:00 AM

Yes I remember sitting on the porch watching the water sprinkler create rainbows - lovely memory, thank you-

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2018 11:36:00 AM

And thank YOU for a lovely comment and your continued support and encouragement, Michelle! Best wishes, gw

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/27/2018 5:44:00 AM

Yay :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2018 11:36:00 AM

yaY -- backwards the same as forwards! :) gw