Notes About The Poem

Every year, the first time I trot the trusty yellow sprinkler out to revitalize my winter-scarred lawn, it's a bit magical for me.  Kind of mesmerizing to watch the water rise and fall.  At least for me it is...

Enchantment

Spring
            Lawn's Brown
            Sprinkler Time
        Enchantment's Climb
       Up Shoots Clear Magic
            Dancing Prisms
             Water Pools
              Birds Bathe
                 Spring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 12:34 PM
It does sound a bir magical! Love the images!
Wolf Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Thank you for your kind words,...and may I be so bold as to suggest investing $5 or so in a plastic sprinkler, attaching it to a garden hose, and then partaking of that magic! :) gw
Roper Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Beautiful imagery, Gershon <3
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Thank you, Eve. May Spring prism rainbows be headed your way! :) Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Clear magic dancing prisms. EXACTLY! Wow! I love this! Thank you for writing it, Mr. I.
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:37 AM
And thank you for reading it and writing such a super-charged comment. It fuels me for the next one. Appreciated! :) Mr. Eye
Faulkner Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 9:12 AM
Yes I remember sitting on the porch watching the water sprinkler create rainbows - lovely memory, thank you-
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:36 AM
And thank YOU for a lovely comment and your continued support and encouragement, Michelle! Best wishes, gw
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Yay :)
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:36 AM
yaY -- backwards the same as forwards! :) gw
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