Enchanting Woods

Morning sun ascends,
..Light spills through the canopy:
...Awakening the forest.

Resounding wildlife,
..Surrounded by verdant trees:
...Praise in peaceful croons.

Calm water cascades,
..Caressing giant boulders:
...Bathing river rocks.

Mist ascends with grace,
..Bubbling, gurgling, roaring:
...The falls sing aloud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 12:36 PM
this is beautiful Raul.....Charma
Canady Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 11:19 AM
Excellent... Picturesque with Words Now, that I know how to to this... (Its going into my favorites... MoonBee
Fraser Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 11:50 AM
Now this is what i call poetry at it's finest, not many will beat this Haiku>>James
Brown Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 4:25 AM
Sensational piece Raul. Thank you for sharing . Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 11:47 PM
Nice sequence Raul.Especially like the last stanza.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Freeman Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 5:41 PM
Beautiful nature view, Sincerely, Moses
Shahwan Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 5:09 PM
Outstanding choka.
Richards Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 2:04 PM
I want to reside in your poetry......for the rest of my days!!!! :) Lovely!!
Goff Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 1:52 PM
I agree with Sara! you have brought the reader on this hike with you! Raul! well done! jim
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Very descriptive writing almost like being there. Sara
Adeite Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 1:07 PM
wonderful piece, i love this, I have not written this form before. thanks for sharing this. You are such a great poet. keep writing
Harper Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 1:07 PM
nice new one Raul..... always thinking up genius work....~$avannah~
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