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Enchanted Voyage

Enchanted Voyage

Aboard the Magnolia paddle steamboat 
Bound down the Mississippi River
Carrying its precious cargo
Daring anyone for a challenge on her beauty and speed
Enchantment captivates guests of its breathtaking beauty a
Fortune spent to showcase and entertain in its
Grand elegant saloon with carved gilded mirrors 
Hanging far above glimmering crystal chandeliers with flickering candle flames
Illuminating dramatic sparkling rainbow colors
Jump and dance with the excitement of the room
Keeping my place longing to melt into the
Laughter of the guest I listen to
Music that plays and sings its melody to the
Night’s mysterious shimmering sky
Obtaining consolation with
Paced movement sounds of the paddle wheel that lulls me into serenity
Quietly meandering slowly coursing down the muddy banks of the Mississippi River 
Riding down to its adjacent towns
Savoring the faint breeze scents of the warm night air
Teasing the romantic scenes
Unique moonlight reflecting shadows cast by hanging limbs
Vulnerable to the rendering of the imagination
Whimsical Xebec shape illusion mysterious
Xenomorphic behavior
Yearning for a never ending voyage ride
Zest only of pleasure

© 7/10/2015



  
Xebec – small three-masted pirate ship
xenomorphic  - having a form not its own
in an unusual form; having a strange form.


''V'' New Or Old Poetry Contest    3.  voyage  
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Eve, congratulations on your First place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest, it is beautiful and wonderfully penned ~ love and serenity _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Back with Congratulations on this new win. A great write. Have a blessed day...........
Agustin Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 4:07 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this ... making me thank the Lord for enabling you to inspire others through your writing talent. God bless you.
Jayasankar Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Aw this is such an excellent write in Abecedarian form...Loved it Eve...Congrats on your win...Wishing you a happy Thanksgiving...Enjoy with family...Hugs...~ Ani
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 7:25 AM
SO good to read this gem again, many congratulations on your win eve, hugs jan xx
Seeker Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 12:55 AM
Wow! That’s an outstanding write in A-Z, so well portrayed, in a seamless beat! Congrats on your win, Eve!
Daniel Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 10:07 PM
Brilliant poem, Eve, beautifully flows, congratulations on your win:)
Canerdy Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 4:08 PM
This piece is quite an accomplishment--very descriptive, reflecting the excitement of the setting. CONGRATS, Eve. Janice
Gauthier Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 8:08 AM
You are relly great at these Abecedarian poems, Eve ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Outstanding imagery in this piece Eve! Congratulations on your first place win! xxoo
Goldsmith Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations on your win. I was riding "Aboard the Magnolia paddle steamboat Bound down the Mississippi River." In your "Grand elegant saloon," I found a cold mint jubilee drink. A great write, just wish my ride was longer.........
Somadas Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 11:21 PM
Congrats on a new win Eve.. Wonderful journey..
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Beautiful whimsical imagery, Eve. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
Ligon Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Sounds lovely. Beautiful descriptions.
Gilmour Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 1:47 AM
Many congrats dear Eve for your 1st place win, fabulous imagery - as I journey down the Mississippi...with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Adams Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 8:03 PM
wonderful story told in this form Eve... great imagery and word usage … best wishes in the contest... hugs
A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:28 PM
EVE, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Thank you so very much, Skat, very grateful for the win. Hugs eve
Leiser Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 11:28 AM
You've captured the mood and the essence of the Mississippi steamboat perfectly in your amazing poem, Eve! Congrats to you :)
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:20 PM
Laura, thank you so much for your kind words and your congratulations I'm glad you liked it. Hugs Eve
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Wonderful haiku Andrea that depicts ur love for the country n flag! Congrats on big win!
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:20 PM
Dr. Tpma A. Sharma , thank you for your compliment and congratulations. Hugs Eve
Delaney Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 9:50 PM
Congrats on your win,Eve: A lovely meandering voyage. SuZ
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Thank you, Suzanne, for your compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Guzzi Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Very evocative use of form! Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:15 PM
Thank you, Debbie, for the wonderful very inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Terry Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Congratulations on your top win. I love the way your poem flows from one line to the next. Great piece of work. :) Janece
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:17 PM
Thank you, Janece, for your compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:17 PM
congrats on 1st place Eve a well researched entertaining poem hugs
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:55 PM
Thank you, Shadow, for placing me on your contest I feel very honored. Hugs eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:06 PM
Outstanding! I so enjoyed this number one winner Eve. Big congrats on you well deserved win my friend!
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:18 PM
Connie, thank you for your supporting , inspiring compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
May Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 5:37 PM
Congrats on a great win Eve
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:19 PM
Thank you, Joseph, for your compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
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