Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Enchanted Realm

Deep into my soul you reach
to gently stroke my desire
All my defenses you breach
my very essence you inspire

You stimulate my hungry mind
teasing my stagnant thoughts
Embracing my process to align
left speechless, mind in knots

Shaking up my calmness now
while refreshing me as a whole
Bend me down to make me bow
I'll be submissive, you in control

Hypnotizing my subconscious 
leaving me dazed, you overwhelm 
Unrestrained no more cautious 
Lead me to the enchanted realm


2/8/2020

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Eric Cohen February 19, 2020 at 5:17 PM Wow. I'm mesmerized (in all the best ways). Best to you. Brenda Chiri February 20, 2020 at 3:53 AM Ah we I'm glad it was in the good way! Lol thank you!;)

Jennifer Proxenos February 11, 2020 at 12:10 AM Your realm of poetic romantic poetry is unsurpassed, you are amazing - kudos and more kudos for this enchanting write you have inked with your magic quill. Blessings, Jennifer. Brenda Chiri February 11, 2020 at 12:53 AM Jennifer thank you! You my friend are too kind!;)

Gordon Mcconnell February 10, 2020 at 1:32 PM Lovely writing Brenda, good imagery and great expression. Trust all good with you, Blessings,Gordon Brenda Chiri February 10, 2020 at 9:51 PM Gordon thank you my friend! Much appreciated! Yes I'm doing pretty good thank you!;)

Paul Callus February 10, 2020 at 7:34 AM The flowers in your enchanted realm are called desire and sensuality, Brenda, and you definitely leave your readers hypnotizing. ~ Warm regards // paul Brenda Chiri February 10, 2020 at 9:50 PM Ahh thank you Paul! Your words warm my heart!;)

Janis Medders Tobechi February 9, 2020 at 10:43 PM Congratulations on a well penned poem with unique rhyme. Brenda Chiri February 10, 2020 at 9:49 PM Janis thank you so very much!;(

Sandra Adams February 9, 2020 at 8:53 PM another beautifully penned poem, another win... congratulations Brenda Chiri February 10, 2020 at 9:49 PM Thank you so much sandy!;)

Gershon Wolf February 9, 2020 at 4:04 PM So fascinating how your mind works. I try to picture any man fulfilling your words -- such as 'stroking your desire,... breaching your defenses...or teasing your stagnant thoughts' -- and I realize that, yes, Gershon, it's pure poetry. Bravo, O romantic one! Smiles, Gershon Brenda Chiri February 10, 2020 at 9:49 PM Lol romantic one huh! Lol thank you Gershon you always make me smile with you comments!;)

John Fleming February 9, 2020 at 10:17 AM Ah well, wrong again -- so you did post it!! :) Contentious perhaps for some readers...but sensuous and poetically erotic for others. I am inclined to favour the latter. Enjoyed, Poetess! With much fondness. :) john Brenda Chiri February 10, 2020 at 9:48 PM Ahh John thank you so very much! You know your comments are always a joy to read!;)