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Enchanted Realm

Deep into my soul you reach to gently stroke my desire All my defenses you breach my very essence you inspire You stimulate my hungry mind teasing my stagnant thoughts Embracing my process to align left speechless, mind in knots Shaking up my calmness now while refreshing me as a whole Bend me down to make me bow I'll be submissive, you in control Hypnotizing my subconscious leaving me dazed, you overwhelm Unrestrained no more cautious Lead me to the enchanted realm
2/8/2020

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Date: 2/19/2020 5:17:00 PM
Wow. I'm mesmerized (in all the best ways). Best to you.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/20/2020 3:53:00 AM
Ah we I'm glad it was in the good way! Lol thank you!;)
Date: 2/11/2020 12:10:00 AM
Your realm of poetic romantic poetry is unsurpassed, you are amazing - kudos and more kudos for this enchanting write you have inked with your magic quill. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/11/2020 12:53:00 AM
Jennifer thank you! You my friend are too kind!;)
Date: 2/10/2020 1:32:00 PM
Lovely writing Brenda, good imagery and great expression. Trust all good with you, Blessings,Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/10/2020 9:51:00 PM
Gordon thank you my friend! Much appreciated! Yes I'm doing pretty good thank you!;)
Date: 2/10/2020 7:34:00 AM
The flowers in your enchanted realm are called desire and sensuality, Brenda, and you definitely leave your readers hypnotizing. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/10/2020 9:50:00 PM
Ahh thank you Paul! Your words warm my heart!;)
Date: 2/9/2020 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations on a well penned poem with unique rhyme.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/10/2020 9:49:00 PM
Janis thank you so very much!;(
Date: 2/9/2020 8:53:00 PM
another beautifully penned poem, another win... congratulations
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/10/2020 9:49:00 PM
Thank you so much sandy!;)
Date: 2/9/2020 4:04:00 PM
So fascinating how your mind works. I try to picture any man fulfilling your words -- such as 'stroking your desire,... breaching your defenses...or teasing your stagnant thoughts' -- and I realize that, yes, Gershon, it's pure poetry. Bravo, O romantic one! Smiles, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/10/2020 9:49:00 PM
Lol romantic one huh! Lol thank you Gershon you always make me smile with you comments!;)
Date: 2/9/2020 10:17:00 AM
Ah well, wrong again -- so you did post it!! :) Contentious perhaps for some readers...but sensuous and poetically erotic for others. I am inclined to favour the latter. Enjoyed, Poetess! With much fondness. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/10/2020 9:48:00 PM
Ahh John thank you so very much! You know your comments are always a joy to read!;)

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