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Enchanted Realm

Deep into my soul you reach
to gently stroke my desire
All my defenses you breach
my very essence you inspire

You stimulate my hungry mind
teasing my stagnant thoughts
Embracing my process to align
left speechless, mind in knots

Shaking up my calmness now
while refreshing me as a whole
Bend me down to make me bow
I'll be submissive, you in control

Hypnotizing my subconscious 
leaving me dazed, you overwhelm 
Unrestrained no more cautious 
Lead me to the enchanted realm


2/8/2020

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Eric Cohen Date: 2/19/2020 5:17:00 PM Wow. I'm mesmerized (in all the best ways). Best to you. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 2/20/2020 3:53:00 AM Ah we I'm glad it was in the good way! Lol thank you!;)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/11/2020 12:10:00 AM Your realm of poetic romantic poetry is unsurpassed, you are amazing - kudos and more kudos for this enchanting write you have inked with your magic quill. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 2/11/2020 12:53:00 AM Jennifer thank you! You my friend are too kind!;)

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 2/10/2020 1:32:00 PM Lovely writing Brenda, good imagery and great expression. Trust all good with you, Blessings,Gordon Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 2/10/2020 9:51:00 PM Gordon thank you my friend! Much appreciated! Yes I'm doing pretty good thank you!;)

Paul Callus Date: 2/10/2020 7:34:00 AM The flowers in your enchanted realm are called desire and sensuality, Brenda, and you definitely leave your readers hypnotizing. ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 2/10/2020 9:50:00 PM Ahh thank you Paul! Your words warm my heart!;)

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 2/9/2020 10:43:00 PM Congratulations on a well penned poem with unique rhyme. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 2/10/2020 9:49:00 PM Janis thank you so very much!;(

Sandra Adams Date: 2/9/2020 8:53:00 PM another beautifully penned poem, another win... congratulations Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 2/10/2020 9:49:00 PM Thank you so much sandy!;)

Gershon Wolf Date: 2/9/2020 4:04:00 PM So fascinating how your mind works. I try to picture any man fulfilling your words -- such as 'stroking your desire,... breaching your defenses...or teasing your stagnant thoughts' -- and I realize that, yes, Gershon, it's pure poetry. Bravo, O romantic one! Smiles, Gershon Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 2/10/2020 9:49:00 PM Lol romantic one huh! Lol thank you Gershon you always make me smile with you comments!;)

John Fleming Date: 2/9/2020 10:17:00 AM Ah well, wrong again -- so you did post it!! :) Contentious perhaps for some readers...but sensuous and poetically erotic for others. I am inclined to favour the latter. Enjoyed, Poetess! With much fondness. :) john Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 2/10/2020 9:48:00 PM Ahh John thank you so very much! You know your comments are always a joy to read!;)