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ENCHANTED PUMPKIN PATCH

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the fourth dimension unfolds where pumpkins dream— not carved faces, but swollen worlds pulsing slow. under the moon's cold coin, vines twist and gleam like question-mark hooks snagging night's velvet glow.
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Gauthier Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 11:06 AM
particularly the clever closing line ~ delightful brevity
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:01 PM
many thanks, Line!
Rolland Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 6:00 PM
excellent imagery, i don't celebrate Halloween, i regret that
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:05 PM
thanks for your visit and supportive comments...enjoy your evening
Hind Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 5:15 PM
" question-mark hooks" that's exceptional and excellent, Sara- a real wow,
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:04 PM
thanks, Paige! You're the best!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 4:25 PM
Hello Sara, oh, this is a creepy poem. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 3:12 PM
Hello Sara, It was my Canadian Thanksgiving Day celebration. Canada celebrates Thanksgiving Day in October. I took 3 days off. i had company. What part of Texas are you in? NHJuigs. /Darlene/
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Hi Darlene! Missed you and your poems lately...thanks for stopping by and for the hugs, Texas hugs, Sara
DiMino Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 5:53 AM
Very mysterious, enchanting. Love the season! For writers the unseen world of ours far more entertaining than the other common three.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:02 PM
I agree with with you, Joe :-) Grateful for your visit and encouraging words,
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