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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the fourth dimension unfolds where pumpkins dream— not carved faces, but swollen worlds pulsing slow. under the moon's cold coin, vines twist and gleam like question-mark hooks snagging night's velvet glow.
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