Enchanted Death

When ignorance led to disaster.  
And citizens became a throng -  
Angry hearts knew not love’s master.
When ignorance led to disaster.  
They beat man-beast; death winds blew faster.
Hatred misplaced was very strong.
When ignorance led to disaster.  
And citizens became a throng -  

One gunshot in air fury flying,
Her sweet voice sang a distant song.
Berating, they went ransacking 
One gunshot in air fury flying,
Goodness found left hatred sighing.  
No calm for rage’s deadly throng.
One gunshot in air fury flying,
Her sweet voice sang a distant song.

The angry mob knew evil’s master.
Enchanted legends made hearts soar.
Pure love returned his life made fresher.
The angry mob knew evil’s master.
His broken curse knew her love’s shower.
The beast, a prince, renewed life – adore.
The angry mob knew evil’s master.
Enchanted legends made hearts soar.

INSPIRED BY:  The Feature Films for Families movie, “Rigoletto”
(The mob scene and related events.)

© July 26, 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/6/2010 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Movie Scene Triolet". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:21:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your HM in Andrea's contest with this wonderful write on a fabulous movie.. enjoy another valuable honor my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:01:00 AM
such emotions felt congrats on your HM c:
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Date: 8/5/2010 7:11:00 AM
dear DAne Ann, congrats with your Hm in my contest. I love how well thought out this is and how you really cared for the piece. It sounds like a great movie. Its only flaw was having irregular syallable count in a few lines. VERY GOOD topic and writing, however. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/26/2010 6:44:00 AM
Great write...I could feel the emotion of the mob..Good luck with this worthy entry..Sara
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Date: 7/26/2010 6:25:00 AM
A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck
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