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Empyrean Union



Sol hides behind clouds
Darkness envelops the earth
Shy like a bride
Awaiting empyrean* showers




17th May, 2022


*empyrean - relating to heaven or the sky

25 syllables

Copyright © Joanna Daniel | Year Posted 2022

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Linda Alice Fowler

July 4, 2022 at 6:54 AM

I love this one Jo! Linda

Panagiota Romios

June 16, 2022 at 3:42 PM

Best wishes, Jo. Panagiota

Andrea Dietrich

May 29, 2022 at 10:37 AM

this is so gorgeous. How did I not see it yet. Congrats on your win, Jo.

May 27, 2022 at 10:33 AM

Jo, congratulations, on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Blessings my friend

May 25, 2022 at 11:44 AM

Lovely and so tender Jo. Congratulations on your win.

Christuraj Alex

May 25, 2022 at 9:31 AM

"Shy like a bride" - Wow! Congratulations!

May 24, 2022 at 9:23 AM

beautiful Jo...really like this one :)

May 24, 2022 at 5:49 AM

Nicely penned. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Paulette Calasibetta

May 23, 2022 at 4:03 PM

Beautiful and mysterious! Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette

May 23, 2022 at 2:02 PM

Lovely write Jo, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith

May 23, 2022 at 1:11 PM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. I love the sky. Today, be blessed with your win....................

May 18, 2022 at 6:33 AM

Heavenly write , Jo--really well done. Best to you.

May 17, 2022 at 11:42 AM

Well done! Aloha!

May 17, 2022 at 4:07 AM

A new word I've learnt today Jo. Good luck, I hope you are keeping well. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

May 17, 2022 at 2:15 AM

Quite a dainty poem.

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