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Empyrean Union

Sol hides behind clouds Darkness envelops the earth Shy like a bride Awaiting empyrean* showers 17th May, 2022
*empyrean - relating to heaven or the sky 25 syllables

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Date: 7/4/2022 6:54:00 AM
I love this one Jo! Linda
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Date: 6/16/2022 3:42:00 PM
Best wishes, Jo. Panagiota
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Date: 5/29/2022 10:37:00 AM
this is so gorgeous. How did I not see it yet. Congrats on your win, Jo.
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Date: 5/27/2022 10:33:00 AM
Jo, congratulations, on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Blessings my friend
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Date: 5/25/2022 11:44:00 AM
Lovely and so tender Jo. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/25/2022 9:31:00 AM
"Shy like a bride" - Wow! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/24/2022 9:23:00 AM
beautiful Jo...really like this one :)
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Date: 5/24/2022 5:49:00 AM
Nicely penned. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 5/23/2022 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful and mysterious! Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 5/23/2022 2:02:00 PM
Lovely write Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/23/2022 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. I love the sky. Today, be blessed with your win....................
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Date: 5/18/2022 6:33:00 AM
Heavenly write , Jo--really well done. Best to you.
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Date: 5/17/2022 11:42:00 AM
Well done! Aloha!
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Date: 5/17/2022 4:07:00 AM
A new word I've learnt today Jo. Good luck, I hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Date: 5/17/2022 2:15:00 AM
Quite a dainty poem.
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