Sandra Haight Poet Pleiades

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Empyreal

Earth orbits 'round the Sun;
  Elliptical, her path.
Equinox, twice yearly,
  Evolves September, March.
Ecliptic plane of Sun
  Eclipses it with Moon...
Enchanting earthly view.


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest: Pleiades E
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Judged: 09/21/2016


Rules: 
One word title starting with Letter E.  
7 lines all starting with Letter E 
describing or depicting the title. 
Each line has 6 syllables.

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Andrea Dietrich September 25, 2016 at 8:08 PM what an unusual word you chose and then you were able to find such good ones to accompany it. Congrats in the contest.

Francis J Grasso September 23, 2016 at 8:22 AM Congratulations, Sandra! ...Fran

Sunita U.D Palawon September 23, 2016 at 5:19 AM An educative write! Well done Sandra. :)

Paul Callus September 22, 2016 at 1:59 PM Indeed a celestial Pleiades, Sandra! Worthy of being a winner! Congratulations!! Regards // paul

Jan Allison September 22, 2016 at 12:56 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2016 at 12:23 PM - I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Sandra - Beautiful done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Chansarkar September 22, 2016 at 9:08 AM Beautiful Sandra,congrats to you!

Beautiful Scars September 22, 2016 at 8:46 AM beautiful sweet Sandra! congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Kai Michael Neumann September 22, 2016 at 8:38 AM Very good, congratulations, Kai

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe September 21, 2016 at 11:58 PM Congratulations Sandra - well deserved - great write Regards, Mark

Agnes Krampe September 21, 2016 at 10:48 PM Back with congrats on your win with this heavenly poem :) Agnes

Joseph May September 21, 2016 at 6:30 PM Wonderful write Sandra...Congrats on your win..

Kim Merryman September 21, 2016 at 5:30 PM Sandra, I admit I had to look "empyreal" up. Your title was unique and your Pleiades was smooth flowing and descriptive. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings!

Laura Leiser September 21, 2016 at 5:08 PM I didn't know the meaning of this word, Sandra. You described it's meaning so poetically! Congrats on your win :)

Agnes Krampe September 18, 2016 at 4:03 PM Lovely pleiades - and I learned a new word (empyreal)! Good luck for the contest, Sandra. Agnes

Jan Allison September 17, 2016 at 12:30 PM A 'heavenly' write Sandra:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Sandra Haight September 17, 2016 at 2:20 PM Thank you again, for your visit and supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra