Empyreal

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Earth orbits 'round the Sun;
  Elliptical, her path.
Equinox, twice yearly,
  Evolves September, March.
Ecliptic plane of Sun
  Eclipses it with Moon...
Enchanting earthly view.


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest: Pleiades E
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Judged: 09/21/2016


Rules: 
One word title starting with Letter E.  
7 lines all starting with Letter E 
describing or depicting the title. 
Each line has 6 syllables.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/25/2016 8:08:00 PM
what an unusual word you chose and then you were able to find such good ones to accompany it. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2016 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra! ...Fran
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Date: 9/23/2016 5:19:00 AM
An educative write! Well done Sandra. :)
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Date: 9/22/2016 1:59:00 PM
Indeed a celestial Pleiades, Sandra! Worthy of being a winner! Congratulations!! Regards // paul
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Date: 9/22/2016 12:56:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/22/2016 12:23:00 PM
- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Sandra - Beautiful done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful Sandra,congrats to you!
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Date: 9/22/2016 8:46:00 AM
beautiful sweet Sandra! congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/22/2016 8:38:00 AM
Very good, congratulations, Kai
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Date: 9/21/2016 11:58:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra - well deserved - great write Regards, Mark
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Date: 9/21/2016 10:48:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win with this heavenly poem :) Agnes
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Date: 9/21/2016 6:30:00 PM
Wonderful write Sandra...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 9/21/2016 5:30:00 PM
Sandra, I admit I had to look "empyreal" up. Your title was unique and your Pleiades was smooth flowing and descriptive. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings!
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Date: 9/21/2016 5:08:00 PM
I didn't know the meaning of this word, Sandra. You described it's meaning so poetically! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/18/2016 4:03:00 PM
Lovely pleiades - and I learned a new word (empyreal)! Good luck for the contest, Sandra. Agnes
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:30:00 PM
A 'heavenly' write Sandra:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/17/2016 2:20:00 PM
Thank you again, for your visit and supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra
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