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Empty Winter

It's almost winter time. A time that I like. When you go outside. There's no one in sight. The bitter wind is cold. There's a clearness to the air. The sky is all grey; No sunlight anywhere. When you stand outside. You feel all alone. The coldness seeps in. You're chilled to the bone. I always like this time. It's exactly how I feel. It seems like time has stopped And the emptiness is real. ©2009 ~FR34K0N4L345H33

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Date: 10/15/2009 5:57:00 AM
Nicely done comparison. Keep writing. Sara
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