Empty Space

Empty Space Where my heart was There is an empty space I leave it that way Just in case I find one To replace The one you stole From me Look me in the eye Look at my face This is a condition Only you can erase Give back my heart You broke it apart Now let your love Be the glue To start the repair Then put it back where The empty space Holds its place Without it I am empty Without you I am empty I’m holding a space For you

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Date: 1/31/2018 5:01:00 PM
This pulls at the heart strings... Instead of using I do not know, you can change this to a free verse.. most poems come under free verse.. Any questions please feel free to ask.. always happy to help..
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 2/21/2018 8:13:00 PM
I did change it. I am still learning. Thanks for your help :))
Date: 1/15/2018 6:34:00 AM
Good poetry always comes from the heart and brings with it the passion of the owner. You score on both counts. You may or may not know it but by putting this poem out there your confidence levels will only have increased. Expect to see more poems on wide range of topics. Best regards David in NZ
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 1/16/2018 3:01:00 PM
So grateful for your comments :)
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