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Empty Sleeve

warm smiles

              hand extended in friendship....


     shaking an empty sleeve

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Doris Culverhouse

October 3, 2010 at 10:48 AM

great win in the contest! enjoyed today!

David Smalling

September 26, 2010 at 6:51 AM

This is an awesome write of wit and imagination ... all the genius that poetry demands combine here to yield you a win ... congratulations

Doris Culverhouse

September 23, 2010 at 5:44 PM

congrats on the win!

Diane Locksley

September 23, 2010 at 11:26 AM

This is superb, Daniel. Congrats on your win.

Harry Horsman

September 21, 2010 at 6:46 AM

really liked this, congrats on your winner. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 21, 2010 at 4:29 AM

Congratulations Daniel on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 20, 2010 at 11:05 PM

OOOH, I like this image. I see the missing hand ready to stab someone in the back. congratulations, Daniel.

James Fraser

September 20, 2010 at 3:42 PM

A most desereved win in the contest Daniel with this fine Senyru. Many congratulations to you >> James

Caryl Muzzey

September 20, 2010 at 2:58 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

September 20, 2010 at 2:30 PM

This was very clever, Daniel. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 20, 2010 at 1:31 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest, Daniel

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

September 20, 2010 at 1:01 PM

Congrats on your win with this senryu, Dan-- how sad to realize that the sleeve was empty...nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 20, 2010 at 11:59 AM

Congrats Dan on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory my friend.. enjoy today with luv...

Francine Roberts

September 20, 2010 at 10:31 AM

great entry, congrats on your win in the contest

Skat A

September 19, 2010 at 11:50 AM

Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Gert W. Knop

September 18, 2010 at 5:30 AM

Ja, Daniel, Du hast Recht, man kann nicht jedem trauen! Well written-enjoyed the read today!...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 17, 2010 at 9:55 AM

As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Dan. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy

September 17, 2010 at 8:38 AM

very nice good luck in the contest a sure winner have a great weekend faleshia

Carolyn Devonshire

September 17, 2010 at 8:21 AM

Wow! Great entry for the deception contest, Daniel. Very clever -- shaking an empty sleeve from one who falsly extends a hand in friendship. Best wishes for success in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn