Home » Poems » Daniel Cwiak » Empty Sleeve

Empty Sleeve

warm smiles hand extended in friendship.... shaking an empty sleeve

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/3/2010 10:48:00 AM

great win in the contest! enjoyed today!

David Smalling

Date: 9/26/2010 6:51:00 AM

This is an awesome write of wit and imagination ... all the genius that poetry demands combine here to yield you a win ... congratulations

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/23/2010 5:44:00 PM

congrats on the win!

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/23/2010 11:26:00 AM

This is superb, Daniel. Congrats on your win.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 6:46:00 AM

really liked this, congrats on your winner. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:29:00 AM

Congratulations Daniel on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:05:00 PM

OOOH, I like this image. I see the missing hand ready to stab someone in the back. congratulations, Daniel.

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2010 3:42:00 PM

A most desereved win in the contest Daniel with this fine Senyru. Many congratulations to you >> James

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/20/2010 2:58:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2010 2:30:00 PM

This was very clever, Daniel. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/20/2010 1:31:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest, Daniel

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/20/2010 1:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this senryu, Dan-- how sad to realize that the sleeve was empty...nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 11:59:00 AM

Congrats Dan on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory my friend.. enjoy today with luv...

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 10:31:00 AM

great entry, congrats on your win in the contest

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 11:50:00 AM

Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/18/2010 5:30:00 AM

Ja, Daniel, Du hast Recht, man kann nicht jedem trauen! Well written-enjoyed the read today!...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 9:55:00 AM

As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Dan. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 9/17/2010 8:38:00 AM

very nice good luck in the contest a sure winner have a great weekend faleshia

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/17/2010 8:21:00 AM

Wow! Great entry for the deception contest, Daniel. Very clever -- shaking an empty sleeve from one who falsly extends a hand in friendship. Best wishes for success in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/17/2010 5:36:00 AM

empty sleeve....makes me wonder why??

Merritt Waldon

Date: 9/17/2010 5:26:00 AM

Simply good...I like it..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 3:37:00 AM

Well expressed thoughts with nice images. I enjoyed it, Daniel