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Empty Shoes

My unforgettable visit to the Holocaust Museum, 
     Washington, DC . . . 

Those empty shoes before my eyes-
     I hear their agony and cries.
Oh God, how could this ever be?
     The feet they nestled once walked free.

All sizes, shapes, stood filled neath skies;
     those empty shoes before my eyes,
they walked with purpose and with grace-
     now thousands piled inside this space.

The lives they led, both young and old, 
     cut short by horrors then untold.
Those empty shoes before my eyes-
     too hard to grasp and realize.

As I, behind this glass look in
     and see humanity's dark sin,
my heart and soul are pained by whys-
     those empty shoes before my eyes.


October 15, 2016

~8th Place~
Premiere Contest: My Take On The Holocaust
Sponsor: The Seeker
Judged: 10/17/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Radhakrishna Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 2:45 AM
Congrats on your great win with a wonderfully composed poem! I have been to some of these museums and they eve Ike a similar kind of response in me
Awtry Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 6:01 PM
Sandra this is haunting... so well written. you are such a talented poet! Congratulations!
Watt Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 2:45 PM
A well-deserved top win, Sandra. A powerful write of what must have been a deeply emotional and disturbing tour of the museum. Let us never forget. Congrats ~ John
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 7:26 AM
An incredibly powerful rendering Sandra. Congratulations for your well deserved top win. Warm hugs, mo
Neumann Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 4:48 AM
Awesome. Congratulations on your win.
Chutani Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 2:47 AM
Sandra, a beautiful expression for humanity.
Pennell  Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 2:28 AM
clever to approach the comp this way works very well congrats stephen
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thank you very much, Stephen. Sandra
Richards Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:34 PM
A unique perspective this was, Sandra.....but from any perspective at all, it is still unfathomable. You wrote an amazing poem from a different angle. Well done
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thank you so much, Carrie. Yes... unfathomable. I appreciate your nice comment...I visited the museum in DC last year...the vision of those shoes left such a painful impression. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:03 PM
A heartfelt write Sandra...Congrats on your win
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. Sandra
Roper Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Great meaningful write , Sandra, congratulations on your poems win.. Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Those empty shoes of those who embraced life! Poignant write! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:23 PM
Thank you very much, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Wow Sandra, this is amazing..good luck it is such a winner in my eyes! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:23 PM
A belated thank you, Laura! Hugs, Sandra
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