Notes About The Poem

Empty Promises

Made promises you didn't keep.
Just words in the moment to appease.
Words that sounded good at the time.
Mere words with no substance.
Words not worth their weight in gold.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 5:09 PM
boo hiss...I despite that trait in a person
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 8:26 AM
lol ~ thanks, Sara
Jones Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 1:42 AM
It’s disappointing when someone doesn’t keep their word isn’t it? Good poem.
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Absolutely, Karen ~ thank you
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