Get Your Premium Membership

Empty Promises

I can recall alot of empty promises you made. And I can remember several times when you got my hopes up, Then crushed them like it was nothing. These feelings I know well. Because I always let myself fall for it. Even though I knew what would happen. I always thought you would change. That's a lie. I always hoped you would. That maybe just once, You'd want to be a part of my life, for good. But who was I kidding. You couldn't even remember my birthday. I don't know if I can ever forgive you, for what you've done. The day you came to the hospital to see your granddaughter after she was born, I let my hopes get so high again. And no surprise you crushed them. I might forgive you one day. But I'll never forget. And I'll never let you hurt my daughter. Like you hurt me, your daughter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/22/2009 6:03:00 PM
My dad would beat me almost everyday.... I fell you truly I do. Nicely written it brought a tear to my eye. -darkpoet
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2009 3:51:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comment on my poem, "Life is a tree." Im soo sorry about your father. Mine left me when i was about 7 months old, and hasnt made an effort to write, speak, or see me again. Today I am 13, so to me its been my whole life. I feel your pain. I'm also writing a poem about my father called "dear dad" Im almost done, and its alot like yours. Again im soo sorry anout ur father. Great POem. Much love, ~Catherine:)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/10/2009 8:01:00 PM
Ashley, I'm so sorry your father didn't remember your birthday. Someday, his actions will come back to haunt him. Thanks for sharing this good verse, Carolyn
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things