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Empty Nests

empty nesters watch leaves skating on frozen ponds… a soft sun beckons ©12/15/2019 Writing Challenge, December – Winter Haiku or Senryu Sponsor, Dear Heart – Wiishkobi Ode

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2019 7:26:00 PM

John, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 12/26/2019 5:56:00 PM

John, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful haiku ~

Peter W Iversen

Date: 12/26/2019 10:31:00 AM

Very nice, thought-provoking poem,congrats-Peter

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2019 2:21:00 PM

- Congratulations, with your winning poem John - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/25/2019 12:17:00 PM

Wonderful, John. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.

Lu Loo

Date: 12/25/2019 8:54:00 AM

great ku dear John, a soft sun beckons - -beautifully expressed. Merry Christmas! x:-)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2019 5:50:00 PM

This is really well written, John. Love it!

Brian Strand

Date: 12/24/2019 10:50:00 AM

Evocative,John

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/16/2019 5:03:00 PM

Love the image of 'leaves skating on frozen ponds' and who (empty nesters) is watching them. Resonates (a bit sadly). Excellent haiku, John. Thanks, Gershon

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/15/2019 11:09:00 AM

And we do enjoy it so! Nice.