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Empty Mailbox

Empty Mailbox Papa, the mail box is empty again Every day we walk down the road Hoping to see something from Berlin In that little box that holds so much hope It’s just a little white box At the end of our driveway On a post the color of a fox Address is 101 Sunset Highway The little red flag is up today So the mailman knows to stop by He doesn’t have much to say No letter from you, he doesn’t know why Papa, every day we send you a note And pray you are receiving them All of us contribute in the hope You’ll see that each one is truly a gem We ask God every day for your safe return So, you hurry home or try to send a note Because the crank on the car is hard to turn Mama misses you and it’s hard for her to cope!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/19/2015 8:51:00 AM
Loved the way you highlighted an inanimate object to symbolize the feeling of sadness, Missy. It will be a pleasure to see more of your works in the coming days. hugs!
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Date: 9/13/2015 8:35:00 PM
Like this one Sassy, reminds me so much of when my husband was in Vietnam and I was anxiously waiting for mail which I was a lucky one as I received a letter nearly every day and he arrived home safely, this is so well written, take care...........Vera
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Date: 9/13/2015 5:04:00 PM
Hi Miss! This is a lovely and touching poem, highlighted by that empty mailbox! The crank on the car takes us back in time, when life was much simpler than it is now! // paul
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Date: 9/13/2015 11:16:00 PM
Thank you Paul. I was hoping someone would connect the crank with times past and the disappointment with empty mailboxes when loved ones are gone.
Date: 9/13/2015 12:38:00 PM
This brings back memories of living on the farm and how exciting it was to receive a letter. Great nostalgic write.
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Date: 9/13/2015 11:18:00 PM
Yes it was a happy event. Today my mailbox is filled with bills and junk mail. Little notes today are sent via text or email. Thank you for the compliment....Sassy
Date: 9/13/2015 12:04:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem very much ... CayCay
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Date: 9/13/2015 8:55:00 AM
A loved one so dearly missed is a deep hole only filled with the safe return of that lost person. Great poem my friend. Solid 7 on this one..
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