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Empty Jar of Pickles

I eat one then two, An empty jar of pickles; A guilty pleasure.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 12:34:00 PM

Yuchers, oh my Abe - the thought of them gives me the shivers>>James

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/11/2009 2:23:00 PM

Ha ha! Everyone loves pickles! But we must watch the salt : ) Thanks Abe so much for stopping by with your thoughtful comment. Miss it here very much. I hope to be back soon, but I am almost afraid to jinx myself by saying it! Be well. Hugs, Shar

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 2/17/2009 11:44:00 AM

Nice...... I would give it a 100000000000000 but they dont have it on the scale

Darleen Bilyeu

Date: 2/17/2009 11:24:00 AM

i like this senryu- nice write.

Anna Mayall

Date: 2/17/2009 11:16:00 AM

i like pickles and your poem great job

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/16/2009 3:21:00 PM

This is a wonderful Senyru, Abe. Great imagery and humor. Love, Robin

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/14/2009 7:34:00 PM

Wonderful Senry Happy V Day. Love E.

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/14/2009 7:16:00 PM

I don't like pickles but I like this senryu. Good job.................Danielle

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/14/2009 7:11:00 PM

I agree with your Senryu, I love eating pickles too. It's not guilty, it's just a pleasure to eat them.

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/14/2009 7:02:00 PM

I love eating pickles, it's my guilty pleasure also. Nice poem Abe. Tyler

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/14/2009 6:54:00 PM

Mmm..mmm.mm Pickles are my favorite and I too eat the whole jar. DN

Christina Vasquez

Date: 2/14/2009 6:10:00 PM

great senryu..........i love pickels lol see ya monday,Christina

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/14/2009 7:52:00 AM

uncontrolable and inconsolable all in one sitting. jhl

Date: 2/14/2009 6:51:00 AM

The title intrigued me. Cute poem. Nice use of this concise form. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable haiku and for your kind comments. Happy Valentine's Day! Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/14/2009 3:54:00 AM

Nice senryu, I know what it's like to say I am going to drink only 1 soda and before I know it, I have over done it. Moderation is the key, but not for me...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 2/14/2009 12:39:00 AM

Very good and amusing senryu Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/13/2009 11:30:00 PM

You sillyhead if thats the worst guilty pleasure you enjoy you're darned near poifect! Laurie

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/13/2009 8:49:00 PM

Nice write, the title caught my eyes..I can relate to this, You have a craving, you tell yourself you are just going to have one, then you have two or three more and before you know it, it's all gone.LOL..Nicely done*Tyesha

Amy Swanson

Date: 2/13/2009 8:00:00 PM

Very clever write! :) Made me grin... my little girl would love this one. She can empty a jar of pickles in no time! LOL God bless, Amy :)