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Empty House-Collab

With the key to a brand new reality She gave me an invitation to goodbye Slipping my way into a new insanity Left alone all I could think to do was cry This empty house is no longer a home Now that you've gone,and left me here all alone Every morning I just wake up an cry Thinking of all those nights you layed right by my side This big 'ole world is just to busy for me Now that your off somewhere flying free I just can't go on living this way All I have left is these last words to say This empty house is no longer a home Now that you've gone,and left me here all alone Every morning I just wake up an cry Thinking of all those nights you layed right by my side Though now our lives carry their own seperate tune I can hear yours play as I stare at the moon The memories you left me bring tears to my eyes Always leaving me walking in dark cloudy skies
1-9-13 Collab With John Wulf and Dan Kearley *If anyone finds these words somewhere in a song please tell me!Something about it just came out to easy?(On my part that is) Ha,ha...* Thanks :o)

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Date: 1/17/2013 10:07:00 AM
Perfect flow for lyrics, I adore this!
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Date: 1/15/2013 5:54:00 AM
You two did a good job..It is a very emotive and expressive poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/15/2013 5:18:00 AM
great collab Dan...enjoyed it much
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Date: 1/11/2013 11:16:00 AM
Dan, great collab, I kept hearing shakin' stevens...David
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Date: 1/11/2013 10:17:00 AM
sad poem is this, well written and a profound read...
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Date: 1/10/2013 7:38:00 PM
Stunning write, a tear of sadness, weeps mi eye.. Deep..
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Date: 1/10/2013 12:53:00 PM
Well done and honestly expressed, I hope that joy will errupt from these sad remnants of relationships past. When in the midst of such pain it is hard to imagine the sun will ever rise again and yet it does.
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Date: 1/10/2013 11:53:00 AM
Hi dan great collab I like it, a litle sad but if your loved one leaves then thats how you feel, all the best Big O, soupmail
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Date: 1/10/2013 3:41:00 AM
So sad, but so well written. - Hope it's not a true story/poem. - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2013 9:39:00 PM
Hi Dan,,, i miss me too...lol... I'm kidding..I miss many here...plus you. John Wulf is a mighty poet... I love his poetry.. as much as I love yours... Now let me read the poem... ~pause~ about the poem. A very sad thought. I don't know what I'd do if my fiance hit me with the key of reality... the poem is well written on both parts... hope it is not reality... love~ LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2013 9:30:00 PM
wow.. this is awesome...very nice written poem..so sad.. heartfelt..and thank you Dan for your sharing :) <3<3<3
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Date: 1/9/2013 9:14:00 PM
Wow...this is good ! You've captured the theme so well, both of you. An empty house filled with silence is often deafening. Enjoyed your poem !!
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Date: 1/9/2013 9:09:00 PM
Hi Dan; This is a good poem, if it's fiction, but if it is a part of your life - it's sad. It sounds good for a song. Thanks for sharing and god bless. Lucilla
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