Empty Halls

When shall death come passing by,
And the world shall at last hear my cry?

When will I wander in his shade,
And feel my breath cease and beauty fade?

So many have cried, so many unheard calls,
Their message echoing through empty halls.

Such cruel a trick the hand of Time doth play,
That in death alone, attention they pay.

A silence louder than a deafening roar,
To be alone encased by walls and a closed door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Morrison Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Excellent piece Emily!
Palmer Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 6:28 AM
nice write Emily,check my When I Die 1&2,might give you a different feeling about death
Schaffer Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 8:16 PM
I enjoyed them :) thank you.
Tello Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:11 PM
hello!!! As u kno, my name is Jose, amazing write!!! As we all know, sometimes death is not a punishment, but rather a release from the plagues that haunt Earth, such as loneliness, which can be a terrible thing, as i well know.
Vaso Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 6:40 PM
An excellent write, couldn't have said better myself!!!
Toil Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Hi Emily. I'm new to PoetrySoup and was wandering around the site when I came across this lovely, haunting poem. We do tend to take one another for granted until death comes. Then it is too late to show our appreciation. I invite you to visit my page and to share your thoughts of my poetry. I hope we can become better acquainted in the future....Sam
Schaffer Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Hey :) Welcome to PoetrySoup. Thank you for your comment and your insite. I'll make sure I do check out your work.
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