Empty Can

A talkative tongue;
Nothing but an empty can -
Sounds bare and poopy.

Hi poo senryu poetry contest 
1st place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 7:37 PM
that's so true. Congrats.
Roger  Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 10:15 PM
Thank you very much...
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 4:20 PM
Super one Roger. Clever win. Congratulations! :)
Roger  Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 5:38 PM
Thank you very much...
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 10:46 AM
you hit the nail on the head with this one Roger! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roger  Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 5:38 PM
Thank you very much...
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 11:03 AM
a little humor or mocking, perhaps!
Roger  Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Both... For some people in here who always talk like they're perfect... Thank you very much...
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