Empty Box

My gift is too big for a box, I pledge my love to you forever , Merry Christmas 
















12-19-16
Alexis Y.

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Paul Callus

December 29, 2016 at 12:17 PM

Magical ... Love has no confines!!! #7+ Regards // paul

Eve Roper

December 29, 2016 at 10:41 AM

this is so nice,,, Alexis... :) Have a Happy New Year’s and all your wishes come true…and don’t forget to eat those Black-eyed peas :) Hugs Eve

Peter Dome

December 26, 2016 at 6:54 AM

Awe this is beautiful. Very clever my talented friend. Well done. Pete.

Andrea Dietrich

December 22, 2016 at 7:42 PM

this is FANTASTIC monoku, Alexis. I loved it.

Lim'Rik Flats

December 22, 2016 at 9:50 AM

Box not empty. Box full of heart!!! Awesome one-liner, Alexis. Huggerboos and Merry Christmas to your house! ~ j

Alexis Y.

December 23, 2016 at 7:52 AM

Hi John, Thank you so much. Merry Christmas to you and your house as well: -)Alexis

Constance La France

December 20, 2016 at 7:10 PM

Alexis, the best gift ever~

Poet Destroyer A

December 20, 2016 at 1:22 PM

A wonderful gift to give... Alexis, So nice to be back and reading the best from the best, I know this is but one line, still I find so much can come from forever... Love LINDA

Alexis Y.

December 20, 2016 at 2:24 PM

Hi PD, It's so good to see you. Thanks for that awesome comment. I'm so happy that you stopped by.Happy Holidays to you and your family.:-) Alexis

David Meade

December 19, 2016 at 11:35 PM

Awesome, now that is loving generously!!

Doug Vinson

December 19, 2016 at 10:41 PM

Ha! Wow, Alexis, that really took me by surprise. : ) I was expecting something about a bad gift, meaningless present, etc. Shows how much I know...

White Wolf

December 19, 2016 at 9:51 PM

The gift that keeps on giving! What a loving thought!

Jan Allison

December 19, 2016 at 6:49 PM

aww what a wonderful gift - and its a gift that can last a lifetime:-) hugs jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

December 19, 2016 at 12:19 PM

Aw, ain't that so sweet, Alexis. You are a true romantic for sure. This poem puts you in the RSVP section of the True Romance club. A beautiful poem indeed. Much love and more love to you and yours.

Winged Warrior

December 19, 2016 at 11:08 AM

If you had to wrap it up...the universe is the box...and love is the wrap...and what's inside...well!...great job and god bless Alexis...your warmly poems warm up my heart...^WW^