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Empty Bottle Drained

. A breakfast good treat Vermont Maple syrup sweet.... Empty bottle drained

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James Fraser

Date: 1/14/2011 12:56:00 PM

I must try this Maple Syrup. They talk about it at work also. Have a wonderful weekend Sara....:)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/13/2011 2:05:00 PM

funny stuff.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/12/2011 2:57:00 PM

great! you have got me thinking about those pancakes sara, good work!

Daver Austin

Date: 1/12/2011 2:17:00 PM

Oww! And how I love pancakes or waffles and good maple syrup. I'll even settle for Aunt Jemima. Trouble is - sugar in the morning is a bummer. A very tasty Senryu, Sara. Love, Dave

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/12/2011 11:36:00 AM

A detectable senryu Sara ;-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/12/2011 8:26:00 AM

Seems so delicious Sara and in my home it would be drained too with the men folk enjoying this luscious treat... good one my friend.. tasty.. delight.. with luv..

Liz Walsh

Date: 1/12/2011 3:18:00 AM

Really lovely piece - Sara - and a very Happy New Year - Liz

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2011 9:47:00 PM

So you just drank it right up? Sounds all right to ME!!!

Joy Wellington

Date: 1/11/2011 4:16:00 PM

Is Vermont Maple as nice as Canada's? Thanks for your love. Joy (Jew)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/11/2011 4:15:00 PM

In answer to your question-maple syrup is a wonderful thing, and yes, the last drop is precious. In my past, I might stick my tongue or a finger inside the bottle. A point of trivia--icicles on maple trees sometimes develop a little maple flavor, and we always buy the real thing, not the flavored corn sweetener because somethings can't be compromised. So--you eat oatmeal too! You have glorified these little pleasures so nicely. Your poem is a teaspoon full of sugar.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/11/2011 4:07:00 PM

Now I know where to send all that maple syrup my New England friends keep sending me. The next bottle is yours, Sara. They seem to have an endless supply and I just like butter on my pancakes. Cute senryu! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2011 4:04:00 PM

Have you ever held that bottle upside down shaking it hoping to get just one drop for that oatmeal because you like brown sugar and maple flavor?...Sara