Empty Bedrooms

I walk past empty bedrooms that once held my boys
The beds made so perfect, the absence of noise
Books there on the book shelf and not upon the floor
No ear-splitting music, no slamming the door

It’s eerily quiet now these once busy dens
These bunkers of bustle with brothers and friends
They’re off to college now the closets are clean
They only come home now on days in between

The weeks of the study the homework and toil
With loads of their laundry all dirty with soil
These nice empty bedrooms so tidy and neat
Just aren’t the same in their pristine retreat

As when the sneakers are thrown in a corner
The fridge it is drained like an unwilling donor
The noise and the smell of exercised teens
Showing off muscles with biceps and spleens

Banging a cupboard while toasting some bread
At three in the morning before heading to bed
Now some dorm at the coast, in some far away place
Or corner of frat-house who’s presence they grace

Our bedrooms are empty the rooms nice and quiet
The sheets all in place and the fridge on a diet
But once in a while it all comes to life
Things they are back to the brotherly strife

Rooms not so tidy and sharp as a knife
As when we’re alone…just me and my wife

David Kettler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Conde Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 4:33 AM
Wow, i love how well you stayed on subjuct The structure of it is emaculate, it almost seems like the syllables are exactly the same in each row. Good Job David, into the Favs list it goes
Kettler Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Thanks John...such kind words! I'm going to check out your poetry!
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 3:14 AM
Very beautiful pen David! I enjoyed reading your piece. A 7 from me!Thank you for sharing it dear friend! Wish you a very Happy 2015! Have a very lovely day :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Wilson Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:23 PM
Very good description of the "empty nest syndrome" David ! I really liked it and felt like I was there in your home! Hugs...Deb
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