Empty As the Hourglass Shatters

for I am left empty as the 
hourglass shatters,
my heart never matters- 
the rain pitter-patters.

I cease to exist in the
timepiece of yesterday’s
grains. 
draining the days away, 
forever lost in lonely 
memories. 

I stacked sandbags against
the river of your anguish, 
and the dam breaks with
perpetual insignificance. 
my only desire was to 
bestow kindness, 
bring you the hope you so 
longingly hungered for. 

the sands of time have run
out… the rain pitter-patters.


July 13, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Carber Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Congrats on your win, L.L.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Time running out is sad, but winning...well...that's beautiful. Congrats!
Gentry Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 10:11 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Barden Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:24 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Luloo - blessings and keep up the good work, my friend! :-)
Nance Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 2:03 PM
I like the imagery although I feel the sadness of time running out. So skilled with the writing, very good! Congrats
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura.
Dutta Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 6:51 AM
Nice. I enjoyed the pitter -patters. love
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