Empathy For the Shredder

Masks are all the rage these days,
Not knowing when we’ll stop these ways,
If how long live in your fears, 
I’ve worn a mask for 30 years!

If you care to guess my name,
Here’s a clue- we’re now the same.
And of trends, I am a setter,
For I am known as the Shredder.

Now and then it’s nice to find,
My metal mask to hide behind.
When emotions start to race,
It’s good my Clan can’t see my face.

Both of us, we had no choice,
To stagger from our muffled voice.
Coming from two kindred things,
For rats are bats without the wings.

It sure gets hot under the mask,
But I’m the one that’s up to task,
And despite my taste for crime,
I was a man ahead of time.

I hope it’s now that you can see,
And have some empathy for me,
So don’t be shy and say hello,
Just watch out for those turtles though.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hoffman Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 8:16 AM
I love the flow of your poem and congrats on your Lifetime membership!
Spence Sr Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations, and excellent post, JD. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. I am very proud of you. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of Empathy stands out, and the tone moves the piece down the page with much grace. The rhyming pattern is excellent. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and God's richest grace and blessings to you always. –Professor, Ambassador, Dr. Joseph S. Spence Sr. (Epulaeryu Master)!
Morris Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 3:44 PM
I like the idea behind this poem, but I think it could be "tightened up" a tad.
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