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Empathy

“Empathy is emotionally connecting oneself with another in his hardship and pain, showing compassion and loving concern” ~ by Poet


Through the country paths, I lazily loitered
Watching Nature in its changing hue
Straying farther into the interiors
Sundry and sublime vistas came into view

It was almost the end of verdant spring
Summer’s sun stood behind my head
Bleat of lambs was heard from far
"Good day to you"….. Someone said.

There stood on the plain, a boy around thirteen
Obviously, he was of tribal breed
With a beaming smile, he greeted me
But on walking to him, he ran like a steed

I saw him disappear behind the trees
And enter into a hut tiny as a nest
He lived in the lap of Mother Nature
Far from the city and its sooty dust

Being coaxed, he hesitantly came out
My tone of assurance and pleasing smile
Seemed to have won his confidence
As to a friend, he shared his eventful tale

Pointing to the sheep grazing in the slope
He said, he earned a living caring the flock
He stayed in the woods all day long
Feeding and tending his master’s sheep

From dawn to dusk, through woods and meads
He leads his sheep, calling them by their name
Un vexed, with simple pleasures he is content
And with a nomad’s life, he seems to be tame

He said at home he has his invalid mother
Bringing her back to health is his mission in life
On referring to his mother, I watched his eyes glitter
Nothing other than her illness posed to him a strife

From every utterance, I could sense his filial love
Even in abundance while shadows line many faces
On his visage, hope lingered as a dancing flame
To me he seemed above many, rich in other graces

While parting, I handed him some money
Pausing unbelievingly with moist eyes
He accepted it when a breeze passed caressing us
As if over the show of empathy, nature seemed to rejoice!


Feb.13.2023
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La France Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 10:02 AM
Valsa, a very nice poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, I like the image and quote also, blessings, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 10:41 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valsa :) - hugs
May Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 3:33 AM
Wonderful write Valsa, Congrats on your win
Poet Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Congratulation on your win, Valsa! This was one that I found to be really enjoyable...Amazing story. Your kindness and compassion shine through.
Daniel Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 3:03 AM
You are a generous soul, Valsa, great tale told:)
Horsman Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 6:44 PM
I think the old saying, 'it is better to give than received' still works in some situation even in this era, Love the poetry Valsa, yes empathy its all here, Love it. Harry
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February 13, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Indeed he is rich in many other graces : ). Great inspiring poem, love it
Andresen Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 12:47 PM
- A touching story, Valsa - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Lovely story. You have a heart of gold. Best for a win, dear Valsa.
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February 13, 2023 at 11:26 AM
Empathy, innocence, and dedication to one’s family are all personified here Valsa, Simple values of a time that no longer exist in this particular manner in the developed world, a wonderful story and poem, I enjoyed very much, all the best in contest, cheers David
Vangaveti Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 10:13 AM
The last two lines are perfect!! They say how nature and universe stand with us and cheer for the good deeds!! Brilliant write. You're an amazing storyteller. Came back to PS after a small break and the first thing I read is this!! Oh, it's a bliss. <3
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