Emotions

Emotions
Strike me so
Suddenly
Feels like I'm
Once again
Hit by a bus
____________
Remembering
When i was
Alive
Just one more
Breath
And then a Goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 16, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Ian,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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