Krish Radhakrishna Poet Free verse

Emotions

slow tears of broken hearts,
deathly silence of lost war,
screams of mother in labour,
emotions we suffer or savour!

3rd placement
Written 13/Jan/2021
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20 words maximum do it with feeling
poetry contest

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Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2021 at 10:35 AM very well done, Krish. Congrats on your win. Krish Radhakrishna January 18, 2021 at 11:56 AM Thanks Andrea! appreciate your visit!:)

Gershon Wolf January 16, 2021 at 8:30 PM Interesting idea there, Krish... That last line, a great example of both suffering and savoring. Congrats on your win in Line's contest. Best always, Gershon Krish Radhakrishna January 18, 2021 at 11:57 AM Thanks Gershon! Happy it was liked! Kind regards Krish

Jan Allison January 16, 2021 at 1:11 PM i feel waves of emotions reading your lines, well penned Krish, many congrats:-) xx Krish Radhakrishna January 16, 2021 at 1:15 PM Thanks Jan! Happy to be placed amongst some excellent writes!:)

Caren Krutsinger January 13, 2021 at 8:48 PM This emotional write is a reminder of how close we are to feelings of happy and sad at all times. Krish Radhakrishna January 14, 2021 at 12:03 AM Thanks Caren! emotions are like undulating waves where we have to keep calm!

Rama Balasubramanian January 13, 2021 at 6:29 PM Good one Krish. Second line superb. Happy Pongal. Enjoy your day. Take care Rama Krish Radhakrishna January 14, 2021 at 12:04 AM Thanks Rama, Happy Pongal to you! looking forward to some good food today!