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slow tears of broken hearts, deathly silence of lost war, screams of mother in labour, emotions we suffer or savour! 3rd placement Written 13/Jan/2021 Line Gauthier sponsor 20 words maximum do it with feeling poetry contest

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Date: 1/18/2021 10:35:00 AM
very well done, Krish. Congrats on your win.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/18/2021 11:56:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! appreciate your visit!:)
Date: 1/16/2021 8:30:00 PM
Interesting idea there, Krish... That last line, a great example of both suffering and savoring. Congrats on your win in Line's contest. Best always, Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/18/2021 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Gershon! Happy it was liked! Kind regards Krish
Date: 1/16/2021 1:11:00 PM
i feel waves of emotions reading your lines, well penned Krish, many congrats:-) xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/16/2021 1:15:00 PM
Thanks Jan! Happy to be placed amongst some excellent writes!:)
Date: 1/13/2021 8:48:00 PM
This emotional write is a reminder of how close we are to feelings of happy and sad at all times.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/14/2021 12:03:00 AM
Thanks Caren! emotions are like undulating waves where we have to keep calm!
Date: 1/13/2021 6:29:00 PM
Good one Krish. Second line superb. Happy Pongal. Enjoy your day. Take care Rama
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/14/2021 12:04:00 AM
Thanks Rama, Happy Pongal to you! looking forward to some good food today!

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