Emotionally Naked

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There's a special place a private sanctuary haven just for us where I know your every thought and you know all of mine We keep no secrets thoughts laid bare to each other hearts beat together we share pulse and breath - we are emotionally naked

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/13/2015 8:58:00 AM

this comes from a space of intimacy...graciously penned, lin.. huggs

Lin Lane
Date: 12/13/2015 2:05:00 PM

Thank you very much, Nette, for such lovely comments.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/13/2015 7:10:00 AM

Lin, the place you described has so much allure. Left me with the feeling of where is the place? You have skillful penned about a place that has the reader desiring to go to such a place. Good job:-) Alexis 7

Lin Lane
Date: 12/13/2015 7:53:00 AM

I'm afraid it's not a tangible place, Alexis. Look deep inside yourself until you find a place where you feel at peace. When I wrote this I was at peace with my husband. I've had to readjust my mind and heart to find a new place where I'm honest with myself. It's not easy, but well worth the trip. Thank you, as always for your sweet comments.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/13/2015 6:39:00 AM

It sounds like you have found your own little bit of heaven Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 12/13/2015 6:49:00 AM

Heaven on earth, Jan. A paradise of honesty and truth. Thanks for the read and the sweet comment. ;)