emotional whiplash

hit hard by divorce it felt like a fatal crash
no hope future nor happy ending in sight
the airbag had failed and the brakes had not worked
the tank felt empty tax expired any insurance foreclosed

it took reflection grief and sadness to resolve the calamity
and eventually rationalisation made way for feeling emotions
in a humble friendly compassionate fashion of self-loving care

he had survived and felt no longer the victim 
so he could not afford to whip himself any longer
self-harm was not the solution for future and healing
and suddenly he looked at the sun in a very new light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Gauthier Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 3:44 AM
It is hard to pick ourselves up after a loss, a betrayal, an injustice, bad luck, a health issue, any blow or rejection... nature can play such an important part in the healing process. And it helps to know that there are many other people also trying to heal out there.
Neumann Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 5:43 AM
Thank you for your comment. I am slowly moving on with reason and emotions both on my side. Wishing you a Happy Easter, Kai
George Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 5:01 AM
Divorce is something quite crushing. Suddenly one feels so lonely and wounded. But instead of allowing oneself to waddle in the puddle of self reproach and despair, one has to learn to find a way out. Nothing marks the end of the world. The road stretches ahead. Learn to move forward looking at the shining stars above. A great poem of resignation and resilience.
Neumann Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 6:10 AM
Thank you. XXX
Buhagiar Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 11:40 PM
Deep poem. Always sad to see such parting.
Neumann Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 1:58 AM
It is very sad, but I cannot allow such a feeling to dominate my new life. Slowly I am getting there. Thank you for your kind comment and kind wishes in return, Kai
Goldsmith Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 2:48 PM
What a powerful write you have here. Have a very blessed day/weekend writing away............
Neumann Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 3:15 AM
Thank you. Life is about progress and not perfection. Kind wishes, Kai
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