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Emotional Meltdown

"Emotional Meltdown" Slumber ... refuses to invade my warm bed as I listen to promises swirling in my head to an emotional meltdown ... in the mirror, there stands a clown ... Dreamland ... eluding my starry eyes as I wander in sad masquerade disguise to an emotional meltdown ... as I destroy white wedding gown ... Forever ... you offered forever, and I believed you with fire in my heart, Eternal ... you whispered eternal, yet your jaded love quickly tore us apart. Betrayal ... is an ugly and unkind state of mind sharp as a dagger thrust plunged from behind Sleepwalking shall never end and illusions pretend midnight amends my emotional meltdown ... *For Craig Cornish's Sleepwalk Contest. *Lyrics written to Sleepwalk melody. *Oct. 5, 2012.

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:56:00 AM

this is me right now... SKAt

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/5/2012 7:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/3/2012 2:27:00 PM

Very unique take on the song sweetie! I likie! Congrad's on your win SO glad to be back! Light & Love

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/3/2012 1:00:00 PM

Congratualtions on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/3/2012 6:21:00 AM

Big congratulations Linda xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2012 2:19:00 AM

Awesome, Linda, and big congrats to you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/3/2012 1:06:00 AM

WON 7TH PLACE .. THANKXX ..

Len Gasun

Date: 11/3/2012 12:54:00 AM

You're both great poet and song writer my dear friend, Linda-M! So beautiful song and i love it! Congratulations on your win! hugs:) Leonora

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/3/2012 12:31:00 AM

charming me with your romantic touch, sweets... congrats on the top win!..:) huggs

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/3/2012 12:25:00 AM

Congratulations Linda. .......Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/2/2012 6:12:00 PM

Hello Linda, my bff..., congratulations with your awesome poem in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest :-) take care~PD

Joseph May

Date: 11/2/2012 5:44:00 PM

congrats on a fantastic win Linda

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 12:11:00 PM

very powerful write, my friend. Hope your hands are better. Love to you all xx

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/6/2012 7:25:00 AM

Emotionally touching write, love it, luv!! Jag

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/5/2012 5:53:00 PM

This is simply a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed this fully delightful and wonderful poem, prime for the song I must admit! You have done this song well I believe! This is quite the write, I love it! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2012 5:50:00 PM

Linda, my sweet bff,, only you can melt the words in a poem, with your pen..I love this poem... good luck in this contest... xox~pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/5/2012 5:11:00 PM

SLEEPWALK ... ONE OF MY FAVORITE INSTRUMENTALS OF ALL TIME .. SLOW ..SEXY .. HAUNTING .. MEMORABLE .. HOPE MY LYRICS DO THE MELODY JUSTICE POETS .. ENJOY WITH LUV .. SUNDAY WE R BAPTIZING OUR NEW LITTLE GUY .. SO CUTE ..