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Emotional Imbalance

My knees get weak- As you whisper; Sweet nothings in my ear. I start to shiver At the words delivered, Our fate becoming clear. You caress my skin, Leaving trails of kisses; Every place you touch. My breath deepens- As your mouth meets mine. The pleasure is getting to be too much. Our passion is apparent. Our kisses become rhythm. Our love becomes a song. I could never really fathom, How these feelings could be; So wrong. Now I sit and think, Of how it had to end. Our closeness is slowly dying. If I said that I could forget about you- this feeling of being safe; I know that I would be lying. Every time I see you, I want to press your body to mine; I want to hold you tight. I love you- Even though I know that; You can't be- 'Mr. Right'. So the struggle continues; I'll always love you- Until the end. It kills me to know... that you can't think of me; as nothing but a friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/14/2014 12:44:00 PM
unrequited love so beautifully portrayed many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:36:00 PM
- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Alyssa ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/26/2013 11:15:00 PM
Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear Alyssa! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 1/26/2013 10:10:00 PM
Unrequited love is one of life's greatest sorrows. Beautifully written and well deserved win! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/26/2013 4:50:00 PM
Alyssa... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA
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Date: 1/26/2013 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, alyssa! Annalise
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Date: 1/26/2013 10:44:00 AM
Congrad's on your win in this contest, it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love
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Date: 1/26/2013 8:48:00 AM
Very powerful stuff unrequited love. Well done, one of my personal favorites for the contest.
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Date: 1/11/2013 11:38:00 AM
i really love this poem. you work is amazing. the emotion you put into your work is just amazing. Lots of love, October.
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