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She once had a face where a face should have been, Blue eyes with a beautiful grin, And blonde tousled hair neath a broad working hat, And her beautifully unblemished skin, Till blue streaked down over both of her cheeks, Till water stained both of her eyes, Till all of her world turned onto itself, And caught her off guard by surprise, And her nose juxtaposed with a mix of a kiss, Her chin became something in blue, And both ears appeared on the side of her face, In the shape of a weird looking shoe, He made her someone she never looked like, All her curves now technically straight, He made her emotions become who she is, With his cubism paint brush and paint.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/20/2019 3:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Lewis. Everything about this poem is perfect. The description, the rhythm and the rhyme
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Date: 3/5/2019 6:46:00 PM
Nice descriptions and interesting way of looking at cubist art. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/5/2019 3:32:00 PM
Love the humor and vibrancy of your poem. Bravo on your gold medal win, Lewis.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 11:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lewis. What a lovely thing to say.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/5/2019 4:26:00 PM
Wow, thank you so much for this placement, super glad that you enjoyed this write, loved your contest, and how much you contribute to our poetry world.
Date: 8/7/2018 11:20:00 PM
fascinating...didn't know that
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