Emotion

I fail to see the emotion in 
your eyes...that I love you that make 
strong woman weak and weak woman 
strong. 
I fail to see the emotion in your
eyes,That,That I love you utter seems
All too vague and shallow...Your heart racing,
palms sweating,unable to look me straight in 
the eye...yet... I fail to see the emotion in your 
eyes. Guess I must be too distracted
by the movement in your pants
Even as you move left and right,sway up and down
its all too clear
I fail to see the emotion in your eyes as that,that erect,solid
unnamed  gets clearer...brother please tell me,have you climaxed 
yet??
I fail to see the emotion in your eyes,as lust
is all over your face
please dear,give me a chance
to dress my naked body in that mind of yours
I fail to see the emotion in your eyes as from afar
the stench of lust caught my attention.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Eaton Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 10:00 AM
Very powerful write Congratulations on having your poem featured on soups home page. Janet
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February 19, 2015 at 6:36 PM
Mbalenhle:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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February 16, 2015 at 7:23 AM
It's almost impossible, Mbalenhle Lyca Khumalo, to stop that beautiful illusion or the emotion, as you put it, that brings the lover to undress, but also fondle and caress -in the spirit of course!tTo me, your poem is a complaint against honnest lovers, a choice for cold or indefferent ones!
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December 20, 2014 at 4:23 PM
MBALENHLE,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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December 11, 2014 at 5:06 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mbalenhle - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 11, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Thank you very much for your very warm words and welcome Anne I too look forward to reading the work of poets across the world, learning from them and interacting with them. I am very much excited about this and I believe it is a very big step forward for me....ecstatic Lee :-)
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