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Emma saw the light on that Sunday bright. Her hands, they were folded, and knees bent right. She smiles at the Pastor’s words. The sun through the window stirred. A slip up of epic proportions - quite! Up front, in the center of congregants, a holiness plagues, as the church does chant. In sheer white she forgot slip. Her blush is the shade of RIP.* She slinks from her seat, in a hurried slant. 2/27/2021 Two Limericks - Let's have some Fun! Sponsor Tania Kitchin HMS 10/10/7/7/10 per verse *RIP for Rest In Peace.

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Date: 3/21/2021 9:01:00 PM
Great limericks,Kim, congratulations! Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2021 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 3/20/2021 4:47:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limericks!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2021 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 3/20/2021 3:11:00 PM
I recall this one. You did well with it, Kim. Big congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2021 8:30:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 3/19/2021 4:30:00 PM
I see it was written by personal experience - made me smile Kim:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2021 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Oh the lessons we learn!
Date: 3/3/2021 8:36:00 PM
Quite the predicament, but surely a lesson learned. Thank you for the chuckle, the result of your cute limerick.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/4/2021 4:42:00 AM
LOL...yes! Thanks, Sandra!
Date: 2/28/2021 7:08:00 PM
I am familiar with this kind of unlucky event. well described, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2021 3:55:00 AM
LOL! Me too!
Date: 2/27/2021 11:05:00 PM
Cute limericks. Next time she'll be careful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2021 4:58:00 AM
You betcha! Thanks, Victor!
Date: 2/27/2021 2:56:00 PM
Oh my it happens to the best of us, lovely entry, it made me smile, We are all human.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thanks :)

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