Emma and the Pies

Emma was a pretty girl, 
And was pretty wild.
She never minded what people said, 
Nor did she mind her mother.
Mornings when she left for school
She also left her books, 
Everyone would look at her, 
And also gave her looks.

She loved to comb through magazines,
Yet never combed her hair,
Her dad thought she should step it up,
So she’d step in puddles.
Now Emma wasn’t really bad
She just had had bad habits,
Deciding to turn her life around,
She turned right on the street.

Now as the child was trucking on home,
She saw a truck come at her,
The driver was screaming “Are you mad?”
It seemed he was mad at her.
She stood and watched the truck tip
Heard a tip, get out of the way.
The driver jumped out and flew in a rage,
While thousands of pies flew through the air.

As the pies began to land
On people and on land,
They all turned red, orange and blue
Emma almost felt blue too.
Now as she stood there looking sweet
Tasting the sweet from her dress,
Absolute anarchy went down
As people bent down to delight in a good old fashion pie fight.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
10.13.2014
Plenitude of Pies Contest 
8th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/12/2014 12:20:00 PM
Wonderful write Brenda, and congratulations on the win. Blessings my friend eve 7
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Date: 12/9/2014 11:39:00 AM
Hi Brenda, Pie wars are good. There are not too many fatalities but it does get a little messy. Nice story and nice win. Congratulations on a tale well told. Earl
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Date: 12/9/2014 9:39:00 AM
Brenda, congratulations on your win! I enjoyed your funny pie story and how all the commotion ended in the hilarious pie fight! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:50:00 AM
Nicely crafted, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:45:00 PM
Great story telling, congratulations Brenda.
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:20:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:48:00 AM
Brenda, I love your fun tale of pie dom. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/18/2014 4:09:00 PM
Loved the ending! Fun read.
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Date: 10/15/2014 1:15:00 PM
I liked these pie fight fun Brenda! Lol...thousands of pies flying everywhere, lol... Enjoyed your story ! Good luck in the contest! ;) Hugs! Love & light! xxxx D.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/15/2014 1:36:00 PM
Lol thanks Brenda for the invitation ... Am in then, :) I want pumpkin pies for me... Especially in my face so I can eat some of them as they land on me...lol...
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/15/2014 1:22:00 PM
Whoops, I guess I sent Paul's as you wrote this, it happens to me all the time. But this one is for you Dorian thanks and you can join in with us.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/15/2014 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Paul. We would have a ball if we had a pie fight. I want banana cream pie in my face.
Date: 10/14/2014 4:13:00 PM
Like how you described Emma's character, poetically! This is a fun write where we are all tempted to participate in an old fashion pie fight. Well done, Brenda. // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/9/2014 11:38:00 AM
...and back with congratulations, Brenda!!
Date: 10/14/2014 2:43:00 AM
A little slice of life. Loved the word play. Lots of fun. I can't see how anyone can do much more. Pies don't lend themselves to deep writes. This is as good as it gets. Well done!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Maurice, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. It was meant to be fun.
Date: 10/13/2014 5:45:00 PM
That Emma.....wonderful story Brenda...hugs Tim
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/13/2014 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Tim
Date: 10/13/2014 3:29:00 PM
excellent narrative Brenda good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/13/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
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