Emma and the Pies

Emma was a pretty girl, 
And was pretty wild.
She never minded what people said, 
Nor did she mind her mother.
Mornings when she left for school
She also left her books, 
Everyone would look at her, 
And also gave her looks.

She loved to comb through magazines,
Yet never combed her hair,
Her dad thought she should step it up,
So she’d step in puddles.
Now Emma wasn’t really bad
She just had had bad habits,
Deciding to turn her life around,
She turned right on the street.

Now as the child was trucking on home,
She saw a truck come at her,
The driver was screaming “Are you mad?”
It seemed he was mad at her.
She stood and watched the truck tip
Heard a tip, get out of the way.
The driver jumped out and flew in a rage,
While thousands of pies flew through the air.

As the pies began to land
On people and on land,
They all turned red, orange and blue
Emma almost felt blue too.
Now as she stood there looking sweet
Tasting the sweet from her dress,
Absolute anarchy went down
As people bent down to delight in a good old fashion pie fight.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
10.13.2014
Plenitude of Pies Contest 
8th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Roper Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Wonderful write Brenda, and congratulations on the win. Blessings my friend eve 7
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December 9, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Hi Brenda, Pie wars are good. There are not too many fatalities but it does get a little messy. Nice story and nice win. Congratulations on a tale well told. Earl
Haight Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:39 AM
Brenda, congratulations on your win! I enjoyed your funny pie story and how all the commotion ended in the hilarious pie fight! Hugs, Sandra
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Nicely crafted, congrats on the win
Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 12:45 PM
Great story telling, congratulations Brenda.
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 11:20 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx
Harper Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:48 AM
Brenda, I love your fun tale of pie dom. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
Eastman Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 4:09 PM
Loved the ending! Fun read.
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:15 PM
I liked these pie fight fun Brenda! Lol...thousands of pies flying everywhere, lol... Enjoyed your story ! Good luck in the contest! ;) Hugs! Love & light! xxxx D.
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Lol thanks Brenda for the invitation ... Am in then, :) I want pumpkin pies for me... Especially in my face so I can eat some of them as they land on me...lol...
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:22 PM
Whoops, I guess I sent Paul's as you wrote this, it happens to me all the time. But this one is for you Dorian thanks and you can join in with us.
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October 15, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Thank you Paul. We would have a ball if we had a pie fight. I want banana cream pie in my face.
Callus Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Like how you described Emma's character, poetically! This is a fun write where we are all tempted to participate in an old fashion pie fight. Well done, Brenda. // paul
Callus Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 11:38 AM
...and back with congratulations, Brenda!!
Yvonne Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:43 AM
A little slice of life. Loved the word play. Lots of fun. I can't see how anyone can do much more. Pies don't lend themselves to deep writes. This is as good as it gets. Well done!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Thanks Maurice, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. It was meant to be fun.
Smith Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 5:45 PM
That Emma.....wonderful story Brenda...hugs Tim
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 6:32 PM
Thanks Tim
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 3:29 PM
excellent narrative Brenda good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 4:15 PM
Thanks Jan.
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