Emily and the Ancient Door

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Young Emily sat gazing at a door, that with careful strokes was painted..
a starry, but moonless night. 
In wandering dreams of far away lands, nameless artist unacquainted, 
she wond'red what lay beyond the door held tight.

Her knees, now drawn together, gently touched beneath her chin, 
were clasped by all ten fingers,
cloaked in silky smooth skin. 

Just then did the door utter softly, three words from four worldly tongues...
in Mandarin, Hindi, Gaelic, and Greek, as if from heroes long dead and unsung...

Though Emily sat listening to each word that was spoken, 
she understood not even one,
languages left old, yet unbroken,
from under a forgotten Sun.

Like a great bard the door, in even older languages said aloud. 
In Tamil, Persian, Hebrew, Irish, and Basque...

As if finally by fate the three words "Please open me" were endowed...   
Emily, now standing, said...
"You needed only to ask".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/13/2022 3:33:00 PM
I was cruising all around to find a poem of yours to comment to but I think I may have seen them all. I landed here and saw your question you asked me two years ago. how many faves Cinder girl has now. It's at 135. But what I like best is the number of hits on it and comments close to 500!!! I would be a real fool to ever accidentally delete it!!
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Date: 2/4/2021 1:27:00 PM
enjoying the cute ending of this one again. Keep clicking on your poems and just can't find one I have not already commented to!
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Date: 4/12/2020 5:30:00 PM
wow, I really like this one. And though it's an older poem, it's a perfect one to read this Easter Sunday!! so glad I found this older one of yours.
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Date: 4/12/2020 6:28:00 PM
Hello Andrea, Thanks for commenting. I was just reading your 'Cinder Girl' for the one millionth time and a thought crossed my mind. What is the number of faves at for that wonderful poem? -R
Date: 10/15/2018 12:59:00 AM
So glad I came back to read more of your gems my friend. This one being hauntingly beautiful and profound. As door opened, new light swept in* Away flew that which had once been* Entering calm seas, horizon softest blue* Waters gentle lapping in white-crest hues* Word-fish splashing beneath the ship* Now and then let poetic verses slip*.... A fav my friend..
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Date: 10/8/2018 8:49:00 PM
A delightful poem, Quoth. Love it.
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